For some people, small, beautiful events are what life is all about!
The Cutie Mark Crusaders: a team of three fillies seeking to find their cutie marks and their— Pardon me, four foals who— five? Six? Just how many Crusaders are there going to be? Will they manage to get their cutie marks any faster? And just how will this change the fate of the universe? Read on, for some of these questions to be answered. Or for general reasons of cuteness.
Part of the Wibblyverse continuity.
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Nicely done, well thought out. Especially the flash back. The beginning and ending narrator stuff I could do without.
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Thank you. I'm not entirely in favor of the narration myself at this point; it began as a gimmick, but now it's more a chore that I'm not sure I can escape. Perhaps I'll go back and edit it out when I update the next chapter.
This was charming, and your writing style lends itself brilliantly to both comedy and feels. I love your interpretation of the CMC and Ponyville’s response to their antics.
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Oh, keep the narration, do.
Personally speaking, I quite enjoyed this. Some excellent ideas and character interactions on display. And "tartar sauce" is an ingenious local minced oath. You may be disappointed with this, but I'm still glad you wrote it.
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Thank you. That really does mean a lot to me.