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Marcibel


"If you want to get better at anything, you have to be able to enjoy being bad at it."

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Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Button Mash, Dinky, Rumble, and Silver Spoon are sent to a summer camp for two months, where they are split apart into the two competing camp teams, Camp Hephaestus and Camp Gaia. Sweetie Belle and Button Mash must suffer through separation anxiety (and having to be on opposing forces); Apple Bloom and Silver Spoon must reluctantly make an alliance to deal with a few bullies; Scootaloo finds love in with a flamboyant Pegasus; and Dinky and Rumble have to handle the troubles of their fellow campers.

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Comments ( 32 )

Oh, that sounds very promising. Have all my likes and faves!

Well, what do we have here? Good fanfic, I see. Promising future. Hmm, got nothing to add. Insta-faves and insta-likes, all of them.

Well written and the premise sounds interesting. I look forward to reading more.

'next chapter' is all I have to say :pinkiehappy:

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what next!:pinkiesmile:

Wait are which one is a colt Diamond Ace or Crystal Wind…Im confused

if you'd like i'd like to help with proofreading, prereading and/or editing :pinkiehappy:

need more:applecry:

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Great!:pinkiehappy:

Whenever I get a new chapter done I'll have you look at it.

I can be a pre-reader if you need one

Awesome, I just know Sweetie's gonna try something to get her coltfriend over to her team... and the fact that the Greek gods were before Celestia mkes me think she was a blessed pegasus or something, like Apollo's sacred horse, and she turmed on them, along with Artemis' steed Luna. Is there gonna be a Grecian diety uprising in this?

So when's the next update to come? I know that school now delays many writers, but any progress on the story at all?

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Fortunately, I'm not going to school right now (not really my decision) so delays aren't really because of that. Unfortunately, I'm a slow writer and I got ahead of myself and published this story without fully plotting the story (which I now do with every story before I post the first chapter).

Also, I've been busy with half a dozen different projects all at once, not mention reading fanfiction, reading real literature, and so on.

Sorry.:twilightsheepish:

This was in my 'need to read' folder, and DANG! If you need an editor or encouragement, possibly a good friend, I'll be right here. In the comments section/ a PM.

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Oh, I could definitely use an editor and a friend, especially on this site. I'm still trying to bulk up the story with material, and I plan on writing the second chapter after I get a few fics out of my system. I'll PM you a link to the Google Docs copy when I'm finished.

SweetieMash 4 life, yo!

5399960 You are my kind of person! Are other said fics ButtonBelle as well?

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Unfortunately, no. :fluttershysad: One is about Lyra and Bon Bon, one is about Roseluck, and another is a crossover based around Babs Seed and the A-New-World-a-New-Way-verse.

However, I do have a few more SweetieMash stories in my head (two at the moment, to my count), and whenever I get around to them I'll be sure to let you know, if you would be willing to edit. :twilightsmile:

I like where this is going but when will it be updated I saw the date it was added and I'm a bit worried
Also I know there's gonna be some (button x Sweetibell) but what about (rumble x scootaloo)?

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No Rumbloo, sorry. :fluttershysad:

5466319 dang would have been grate if it did

approximately when will this be off hiatus? it would be a real shame if it were to die it has such great potential

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Ships, please. This thing isn't even close to being dead. I just needed time to work out the plots, and I get regularly distracted by writing other fics. I do plan on updating some time in the very near future (i.e. this month, if all goes well).

5576387 great to hear i know that feeling i was planning on making my own sweetie mash fic but collage and gaming kinda distracts me...
Its easy to ask things of others and take stories for granted but they take a lot of time effort and thinking (if they are written well anyway):twilightsmile:

Someone pls tell me this writer hasn't forgotten about this fic pls.

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This writer has not forgotten about this fic. Other stories have just been on the forefront of his mind, along with battling laziness and a sudden overabundance of games to play.

6743274 Well I'm glad you haven't forgotten can't wait for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

Will you be writing on this story again?

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I plan to. I want to rewrite this chapter before I do, however, and actually have a solid plan to move forward. And I've been working on other stories, too.

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When can we expect the next chapter?

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I'll be frank, I have no idea when I'll get to this.

Not to sound demanding but dude it is 2019 will you contunie this great story please

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