Princess Rainbow Dash

by Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

The Celebration

The main 6 hoped on the train to canterlot, 30 minutes later they were there and they went inside the castle Rainbow Dash went inside then walked outside and looked down at everypony. "Here we celebrate, Rainbow Dash being a Princess,” Princess Celestia.

Everypony cheered, "Woohoo!”

Rainbow Dash's friends hugged her and Rainbow Dash done a Sonic Rainboom.

Comments

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

I hope you like it and please don't dislike it don't read it please if you don't like Rainbow Dash

[Frostbite_1]

I honestly think it is a good story, the only thing is..
It would be good to add more detail into it, because to me it was a little rushed.
I will say though, this was a funny but good story

[phantomlord01]

You got the characterization down pat but the writing is a little sloppy and the pacing moves too quickly. I think that if you took your time with this and gave more detail it would've been better.

[RuinQueenofOblivion]

Yeah, gotta agree with Phantomlord01 on this one.

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

I couldn't think of anything that's why

[PixelMoon]

Interesting story.. I shall give you a thumbs up, my Dashie!

[Kunama Windrider]

I loved the idea, but it was quite rushed and it didn't have much detail.

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

Sorry couldn't think of much detail sorry
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[Kunama Windrider]

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Okey dokey!

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

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I already have

[MidnightShy21]

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If you couldn't think of anything there are multiple things you can do:
1: Take more time to think.
2: Make a blog or something asking for help
3: Ask some good writers on this site if they might have ideas/tips etc.

[Tailbiter231]

Well... I really like the concept of Rainbow Dash being a princess, and she's one of my two favorite ponies, but... no offense, but the quality wasn't exactly the best.

[TheMysteryMuffin]

Great. Loved it. Cute.

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

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Thanks! :D That was very appreciated.