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After attending to the Wonderbolts Academy for several months, Rainbow Dash is ready for the tryouts. Only the best pegasi get one of the treasured spots on the team. The stakes are high. Failure is not an option. But what happens if Rainbow Dash not only obliterates the competition, but also fulfills her destiny in the process?

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You fucking yenuis

2980687

That's why I also said when he told me the idea :trollestia:

2980687

Thanks, the idea just came to me one night.

“Are we gonna have to do this every year, if so I need more cider,” Luna whispered into her sister's ear.

Greatly amusing. You have earned a mustache in the art of comedy and swapsies :moustache:. Anything to say for the occasion of mustache presentation?

...Hmmmm, Rainbow Dash become an alicorn...

I see no problem with this

can you make a story about my little pony friendship is magic season 4 and i love this story

THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME.

2980806 yeah it is can you do that

2980880 I haven't read it yet, that was a preemptive comment.

2980880

Haha, I smell butthurt :trollestia: Edit: I think saddle-sore is the more fitting term.

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Not canon, but it should be, all six should be treated equally. But for the time being, it's just a random shot.

I liked the story though you'd think that twilight having been through the same process, and her friends having seen something similar a year earlier would at least have a good guess as to what was coming when the light in the shape of RD's cutiemark appeared.

This would ACTUALLY BE AN EXCELLENT IDEA TO END SEASON 4!! Props to you good sir! You are a genius.....you sure your not on the writing staff? :trixieshiftright:

This was just.....wow....I dont know what to say

AMAZING! EXCELLENT STORY!!!

Are you SURE that you weren't drunk as hell when you made this?

2981286 just Because Twi isn't the only Alicorn princess in this fic :rainbowdetermined2:

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hey i dont mind that dash is a alicorn.(the hole mane 6 should have became alicorn's .friends forever right?) its just that dash is one of my least favorite ponies.

I could see this as canon... I mean, true, all mane 6 should be treated equaly.
Also, as my memory tells me, apparently Twilight is NOT going to outlive her 5 friends, so, either she is mortal OR all the rest of mane 6 turn into alicors in the end and thus we end up with a mane 6 immortal alicorns party of awesomeness.
Yeah, I can totally see this as canon. :rainbowdetermined2:

2981307 then why did you read this? :ajbemused:

Rarity is my least favourate

This was great, both as parody and seriously! Even if the coronation definitely got out of hoof, the stuff leading up to it had a fair amount of genuine emotional impact. :twilightsmile:

Now I'm no fan of the alicorn Twilight, but after reading through and rolling my eyes for a bit, I thought "Screw it" and made this a favorite.

BTW, how many alicorn coronations does Equestria need to go through anyway? I'm mean, seriously. Who would want to go through that?

You should make coronations for every pony including the cutie mark crusaders

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that's kinda what i am thinking.

2984829

Problem is, even this one here was a sorta repetition... How boring would it be to see the same thing another 4 or even more times?

Big mac should be the newest princess

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No offense but...

For me it was to much like twilight becoming a princess and you know...

2981360 I bet it's that she's mortal - Cadance was turned into an alicorn at a pretty young age and she seems to age normally.

It seems that you have to be born an alicorn like Celestia and Luna were (according to Faust) to have immortality. Or constantly use age spells.

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I understand. It's suppose to be like a parody.

As much a I like this parody, if this does remotely happen, I's start a shotgun tasting convention.

3006307

Haha, it's gonna happen I know it.

Comment posted by cringe deleted Jul 27th, 2014

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Everypony will protect you.

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Really? ._. AWESHOME :D

Best. Coronation. EVER!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Terrible.

I laughed. A little.

This reminds me of one of the alternative endings to The Games We Play.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

That's all I really have to say to this.

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