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bakersong
favorite character is applejack and i have been a brony for a while now
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11/10 would read again
Overall points for using one of the lesser used character which I personally love. But I got to talk some points do to writing it is in all it's glory simplicity and direct. That is not a bad thing but it also makes it less impactful. Try and be like the act of clop be passionate try and convey the heat of the moment and the passions of the characters man. With clop the better ones noramlly have a heat to the words and use lots of detail with added symolyism and similes.
8128151 I like you, you give out great criticisms. Which I was looking for since this was the first dedicated one shot story I did for uh, mature audience.
8128329 dont worry about it man writing is a craft just shoot for left filed and keep pounding away
8128998 By the way, nice abs.
8129243 ......what??
8129844
i agree nice abs
8222951
again what????
8226108
do we need a reason to compliment people
8226421
true but still random and out of no where. That and I do not have abs
8226506
yes you do i mean come on look at yourself
8227267
dude I'm 267 and I game alot
This was a awesome and I hope there's will be a sequel.