Fluttering Wetness

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emp_zealoth

emp_zealoth #1 · Mar 4th, 2017 · · ·

Sweet and interesting, no errors that I noticed, albeit pretty short and therefore somewhat rushed. Upvoted :p

theomegabrony

theomegabrony #2 · Jun 20th, 2017 · · ·

Nice story but several errors in wording. Maybe not errors but difficult to read.

Bobby Freesteam

Bobby Freesteam #3 · Jul 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Where is a sequel or another chapter when you need it, this is just so amazing!

JediAlexColbent

JediAlexColbent #4 · Nov 22nd, 2017 · 1 · ·

Oh. So what are you doing here? Didn't the others offer to take you in?"
"Well, Twilight, didn't want to have any more guests since she already has Spike, Starlight and Trixie; Rarity didn't want me to interrupt her meetings with her clients; Rainbow makes a lot of noise when she wakes up at four o'clock in the morning; Applejack and her family barely sleep at all and Pinkie sleeps with so many balloons, confetti, frosting and all kinds of party equipment.", you tell her. "So I decided to stay with you. You're always quiet and are so very kind to your animals and your friends. "

So he just decided to stop by and impose on Fluttershy without her prior knowledge nor her consent because.... plot? I understand this is just a setup for clop, but come the Hell on.

That One Brony Dude