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Pinkie Piecket has found a golden factory pass to enter the factory of Mr. Billiard Blonka. She along with her grandmother and other ponies with their parents journey inside the maze that is the candy factory. What kind of twists and turns will they encounter on their journey? One thing is for sure, they will certainly have a sweet tooth for the unexpected.
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Like the songs :)
Isn't this supposed to say microphone instead of camera?
So, the School of Friendship still exists in this universe, and Pinkie still teaches there, but she lives at the rock farm instead of with the Cakes? Okay, a bit of an odd concept to grasp but not unbelievable. The fourth wall breaks were hilarious, but you might want to dial it down a few notches. It kind of messes with the mood of the story.
Wait, so the contest isn't open to fillies and colts?
I thought Lightning Dusteguard was living in Rainbow Falls.
I thought Trixie's father was Jackpot.
Bronies seem to love making Lightning and Wind Rider related for some reason.
Hmm, this story feels a little weird with the kids being replaced by adults, but at least the contract part makes a bit more sense.
Okay, I'll admit it. This part was funny.
Oh, goodness me, I don't know a lick of Japanese.
Well, that happened. Also, one would think that Stygian would know better than to randomly shove an experimental piece of candy in his mouth.
Fun fact: Nitroglycerin can be used as a heart medication. However, medical nitroglycerin is mixed with a bunch of inactive ingredients so that it doesn't explode. In theory, adding enough nitroglycerin into candy to make it explode would make it unfit for human consumption.
You're an adult. You could have read it yourself.
I thought they were supposed to be phoenixes.
That ending was too perfect.
Okay, out of all the ponies to use for Mike Teevee, why Stygian? He's one of the last people in my mind who would even try something this idiotic.
Hmmm. Okay, I think I can see why joshscorcher preferred the Tim Burton version to the over the original movie.
Yeah, the Burton version was much truer to the book, and I liked the book. Granted, when I first read the book, I imagined Wonka to be more of something out of Looney Tunes as opposed to, well, whatever Johnny Depp was trying to do. 
I must say though, this story isn't bad. It lacks polish and some of the casting is a bit questionable, but it was a fun read. 