Ooh, an update. I almost forgot about this. Reading now :3

Not sure if Applejack was the best Apple sibling for this scene. Apple Bloom has a lot much childlike innocence and such.
As for Octavia and Vilyn, I think they work better as sisters, but other than that, telepathy makes for a possible solution

AN UPDATE I thought I'd never se the day jk

So let's see how this goes down someone as allready fainted so it can only get more intresting am I right

Noticed some errors, mostly typos along the line of misspelled words and a lack capitalized letters at the start of proper names, you might want to wait a few hours before hitting submit so you can do one last errors check before hitting the submit button

So when can we expect the next chapter?

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Thank you for reminding me about this. I'll see if I can do it, but recently I haven't felt the urge to go back to any of my previous stories. Maybe a week?

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okay

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So it's June, I take it you're not continuing the story?

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Oh. There are people who actually want me to finish this? Well, if that's the case, then I'll put a bit of effort into cranking out chapters for the few of you who care. I never came back because I figured no one gave a crap. Well, that and I'm lazy. I'll make a new chapter.

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I can't speak for others, but I find the ship an interesting concept.