Given how different Octavia and Vilyn are, I think sisters, half-sisters and or step-sisters would be their relationship, but other than th at this was a great second cha.... wait a minute how come neither of these two girls can't id Big Mac? Okay Vilyn not connecting the dots because she's tired from work, but Octavia? I am reading too much into this there might be a pregectly logically reason why... looking foward to more.

8149325 My friend, there is a perfectly logical reason to this. Not even in the show do either of them know Big Mac. Plus, they need to be strangers for the whole romance to work.

8149724 fair enough.

Good story so far

Are they humans or ponies? I'm confused.

8301902
Humans dear.

8301910
Then why did you write; Those ponies love you? Those ponies, how can they be humans when you wrote ponies?

8301926
slip of the keyboard, friend.