7. Additional
Chapter 7
Decisively, the grand mare and her sister, and their friends, had a congratulatory celebration afterwards. It was a fiasco of flavors, with apple pies, made by the hosts, nesting on the corner, apple fritters cradling together, staying nice and toasty, in the center, and delectably, hot-looking apple cider, toasted by lovin' sisters. Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo hardly touched their desserts, nor their ciders.
The victors came to Rainbow and Scootaloo, and gave them their warm, friendly, generous smiles.
"Congratulations, darlings, you did awesome!"
"I know, but-"
"Thanks, Rarity! Sweetiebelle, you did awesome too!" Scootaloo interrupted. Her eyes glowed with anxiety, perspiration, and love. Warmly, she smiled. Scootaloo hadn't been congratulated on anything, without being an instigator being the celebrator.
"Hey, Rainbow, or Scoots, are you going to drink your cider?" Sweetie asked. Her bright eyes and big, round belly dignified this.
"Go on ahead. Not hungry."
"What's got you down?" Rarity asked.
"Nothing."
"It doesn't seem like that, darling. What you need, more like all of us, is a good ole-"
"D?"
"Pardon?"
"You said ole, like AJ would."
"Well, it's not about AJ, is it? It's about how you need to lift your spirits. So, how about you go and stretch your wings, perhaps get a few rainbooms in, darling?" insisted Rarity.
"Yeah. you're right, I gotta leave. Later, Sweetie; I'm gonna come back for you, sport."
"Okay."
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Well it is nice to see you taking some interest in this story again...even if it is just a couple hundred words.
1311019 Yeah, I haven't worked on it in a while, so I decided to add another chapter to see how it affect the views, and it did greatly, so you'd better expect more chapters in the future.
1314493 excellent
1314708 Thanks.
Very Cute Story
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It may be a little bit too late to say this, but . . . Oh, well.
Was making Rainbow Dash 14 a choice on your part, or were you trying to make it canon? 'Cause in canon, RD is 19 or so.
And in the case of the latter, Scoots is around 12-13 in canon.
1521536 M' choice!
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In that case . . .
Actually, I haven't even read the story yet, so I'll get back when that happens.
1521563 Taytay!
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Okay, so I read the first chapter (that was quick
This could use a lot of work. You have the basics down, but there are some techniques you could imply here and there to make the story even better.
I could help you with that. PM me if interested.
1521573 Yeah, I realized that.
Very nice! Tracking.
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