Madeline Wolfe hasn't always had the best life, but she managed to find an escape in the use of her powers. First robbing banks for fun, and later to protect the people of her city from those who would harm them. After a fatal encounter with her arch-nemesis, a desperate use of her power sends her to another world, filled with heroes and villains very different from her home. Badly injured and out of her depth, will she manage to make her mark on this new world? Or will she fall to the wayside and be forgotten? Look out Maretropolis, Anomaly is here to play!
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not bad for a 1st chapter... i like how you set this up so far. love how you had fillysecound not use her speed while she is in the her nermal outfit really makes this feel like a superhero story. i look forward too more
It is somehow interessting, but it sounded like she made a lightshow in the air and the rather weak Villain got angry and just stabbed her with a knife while she was distracted. I guess I couldn't really image what or how she did it.
What exactly are her powers? Gravity?
Are the Power Ponys well Ponys or do you make them anthros? I think Ponys would be nice.
In a way this looked like she wasn't invinsible and I like that. I always wanted a Power Pony X Human story with not to many Crossover Villains or at least no one that is to op. I mean I don't want a Villain where the Power Ponys can't help and I don't want the main char to fight them alone and with only one hand.
7980307 Oh yes I think I agree with that and even if it is to short I give you a thumb up already.
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Thank you for your input! I really appreciate it. I'll try to exit things to be more clear when I get home.