Equestria is lost. its lands burned and soiled with taint. its inhabitants has been lost and consumed by its own sins. its future forever condemned to damnation... or has it. can it be saved, reborn not of what it once was but better. can Equestria truly become a paradise once again. for most, it will take a miracle... but maybe it only takes the will of creatures not born from this world. they have faced similar trials and succeeded, they have fought many wars but have not allowed it to consume them, they are.... human.
Chapters (5)
I like it, more please.
Based on the errors in the long description I'm going to recommend finding an editor.
More please
That long description burns my eyes.
Re-write time
I'm giving this a thumbs down because of that plethora of errors, but take a look at the "Editors-R-Us" group, you might find somebody who'll help.
Please use capital letters after your periods. Please!
This looking interesting,plz update.