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Hm so they destroyed the centaur and either erased the memory of the people here or rewound time?
Bit miffed by that sincerely...
More than one reason it feels routine...
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Oh thank Celestia somebody understands that reference.
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Almost certainly rewound time.
But what was the trap though? Was the knowledge itself poisonous?
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"Hey, Twilight, the Nameless One's name is Eternity. Dim is a dangerous pony. Somepony should probably go check on him."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXzEcwYs8Eo
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Fucked with their plans, not poisonous. Though honestly they could have just _altered_ the information in everyone's heads and had a chat with the centaur construct about revealing specifics. No doubt there was plenty of information in his head that probably should have been safe to make it out of Skyreach. Also makes me wonder if that foal-bot was murdered, as well.
Ah yes, sisterly bonding over a scrapped conglomeration of consciousness! Very wholesome.
Crap, now I have to look back and question how many other chapters this has likely occurred in. Well played.
What, are you trying to imply having foregn bodies violently emerge from within you is a bad thing?
I understand the "First God Alicorns'" desire to keep that place's purpose a secret ... but first the Tree of every possible cutie mark and to what Element it belonged, now this?
There has to be a way that these four retain some of their knowledge, otherwise it feels like scenes of this sort are just lore- and plot-dumps for the reader, while ultimately leaving the characters unfulfilled and their time ultimately wasted with nothing but PTSD to show for it.
Kind of a depressing read when this just negated several chapters of writing. If by the end of this they don't have the right to at least carry some of that knowledge that keeps "getting reformatted" out of their minds, it is seriously going to disappoint me, as having it would explain some of their future selves' doings. Absence of it would not ...
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A lot of it does make it out. You'll see what I mean when it happens. But that's near the end. They leave with a pretty good knowledge of what Skyreach is and why it exists.
The cover art is both a hint and a spoiler.
That's one way to give the reader information without also giving it to a character .
Tarnished and friends just can't catch a break, can they?
So im guessing now, without the Director there, they just get to see the zoomed-out static view of a moon crashing into a world? Not ominous at all...
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That event is done and over.
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Ah, right. A manual rollback, minimal temporal shenanigans.
I somehow doubt that the next program on the schedule is any more cheerful, though, but I also suspect curveballs.
So I was on the shower thinking about Kudzuhaiku *sip of water* ‘s latest chapter of Skyreach and it occurs to me to wonder if events above lead to the creation of the ~Rules~ .
I also began to wonder about Sumac’s layers but that’s a different story.
Congratulations. You have crafted the literal worst possible sort of cliffhanger.
Alright, where are you hiding, Yoshikage Kira? Did you plant Killa Queen on one of our heros? XD
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Hmm. So many other stories making such frequent references to Skyreach, and then you go and make a Skyreach story. And now you're going into such detail about the before time. Even imagining it feels daunting, but are there plans for a story set in pre-Grogar times?
I've been meaning to ask...how does Lima Bean play into all this? After so many stories I may just be forgetting something. But she's Flicker's...guardian? Or he her chosen, right?
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She is Death.
Pale's collector of souls.
The repo zebra.
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I was just trying to figure out if she was special or just hired for the job.
I am sooo mad right now!
All of that knowledge! Lost forever!
Ahhhhh!
Not to mention our heroes were finally getting some well deserved rest both physically and mentally.
Aghh!
Wow... Mindblown...
The beginning literally feels like the reunion of Celestia and Luna in a sense. Their mother must have learnt a lot from her daughter's turmoil to talk and apologies to Terra.
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That's interesting... how many times the gang had "died" before Terra rewind back the clock.
okay so here you've committed an authoring faux pas
this chapter exists purely for the benefit of the audience, the characters gain nothing from it the reversion and prevention of the event negates things
kudzu these characters 'deserve' there answers, they have suffered for it...sorry but this particular story choice was a mistake, your writing is normally quite on point buy yeah...this was a goof.
that said its one mistake in a mountain of good writing so ya know what....still 9/10 would recommend.