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Every brony knows that meeting the Mane Six would change their life. I am no exception. I gave up on life and happiness and I'm just going through the motions. That is, until a certain cyan pegasis appears in my back seat. Now I have to deal with these ponies that keep popping up one by one.

This fic is highly based on you guys. PLEASE leave comments on who you want to show up and who you want our hero to be shipped with by the end. I have a very short attention span, so I need someone bugging me to put out a new chapter. If there are no comments or requests, there probably won't be a new chapter.

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Comments ( 88 )

Okay. I review stories. And since this is an interactive "story" then I hold no domain. Therefore I will comment with a face.

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*edit after reading*

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Alright, the fics okay.

Next to come: Twilight, because she would have a reason why they are there or something.
Shipped:...............None, because a human being in a relationship with a pony is weird and gross, unless they get turned into a pony or the pony being shipped turns into a human.:twilightsmile:

This can turn out interesting.

PINKIE PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:scootangel:

Yeah, that's right, the PARTY PONY!!!!!!!!
Sorry, got a little carried away there.:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

840128 can do, just don't expect any holding back.

Cool man, love the story it would be really cool if you put Lyra in there anyway keep put the good work!:moustache:

Put that punk Scootaloo in there... turned into a twenty-year-old human with her still-a-child mind... and ship her with the lead character.

Try trixie... that may get interesting:trixieshiftright:
good fic though

yeah put trixie in!!! i agree with him^
but for the love of Celestia dont humanize them at all or ponyize him that would make this story bad. keep them the way nature intended them to be. so no magic to chamge them into humans or him into a pony WHAT SO EVER!!!!!

but other than the suggestion great story keep it up.

Wow, I this fic hadn't even passed last night and I suddenly have 12 comments already?? That's more than any of my chapters got on Fanfiction, even from fics about Naruto and Tsubasa Chronicles with big fanbases. I'll try to respond to everyone, but if this keeps up, I might end up spending more time responding than I will writing! Thank you all for your suggestions!

Let's see, Dark Lightning, Yes, next is Twilight with an explanation but it IS NOT her fault. WAY too many fics have her screwing up and sending them (or the human) to the other world. I'm going to try to be a little more creative than that.

None1234578: Had to do a double take on your name there ^_^ You and Derpy Forever both suggested Lyra, and I've got a few ideas, but it may take a while, I'd like to get the mane 6 in, then possibly Derpy. And between Derpy and Pinkie, there will be shenanigans. :scootangel:

Zytharros: A 20-year-old Punk Scoots with the main character, huh? That's... interesting. In a good way :moustache: I don't think it'll fit into this story, but I may try a one-shot on it. Maybe a spin-off where I can ship him with different characters while still keeping this one a fairly normal Pony on Earth story. I'll add it to the list though :pinkiehappy:

Lyna_BrushStroke: Trixie... oh god, more ideas. I may use this one. But again, it'll take a while to gather everyone on Earth (well, not everyone...)

Derpy Forever: see above ^^ Also, I actually hadn't even considered changing them to humans. And i don't intend on taking him to Equestria. Not in this fic anyway. I may have Twilight learn a spell for changing them, but it will not be permanent nor will it be a big deal shipping-wise.

Rainbow Lili: Of course Pinkie will be there, silly! :pinkiesmile:

And thank you to Crunchbiterx, Mr. Ignorable, DTKingPrime for their review as well!

Good god, that comment was huge.... I think I'll try PM's next time :pinkiehappy:

842681 Actually, my sister and I sat down tonight and planned out the next like... 4 chapters. Pinkie is in the next one, but I do like the idea of the GF freaking at the ponies.

I have some hilarious ways that the others are going to show up. I think you all will especially like chapter 4 when... well, I won't give it away :pinkiesmile: Seeing how many responses I got, this story should update about once every 3 days or so, hopefully keeping chapters at ~3000 words.

I don't know, could turn out good. Watching.

Pretty cool first chapter, excited to see what direction you take it in.

I made an account just to tell you that this is the perfect fic I've been looking for!

"Fun Fact! Did you know, according to FimFiction, creeped and teleportation are not real words? O_o "
You silly, that's your browser saying that.

846583 As in firefox? Honestly, my word processing program has no spell check, so I end up using this weird Word Counter website. When I copy paste to it, it does the red underline thingy and I sift through the someponies, Fluttershy's and whatnot for misspelled words. And of course, the old method of actually reading what I wrote. Why would Firefox no recognize those two? That's weird. In that case, I change it to: "Fun Fact! Did you know, according to My internet browser, creeped and teleportation are not real words?" Lol

Since i can hear my two cents. First it kind of awkward read not that it's a bad story no not at all. Second are you going to keep them on earth cause that be cool because there not a lot of those, if not well it still be good. Third rainbowdashXoc.

it would be funny if in the morning he woke up to find pinky standing on his chest staing at him whit a smile like this :pinkiehappy:

Enjoying it, keep on rockin! Also : If you somehow manage to get another oppurtunity to take a picture, make sure the lightning doesn't wake them! :pinkiesmile:

PS: Next thing to show them is a music playing device. Imagine : They would think the musican is playing it in your house. Glorious, excited for new chapters!

PPS: Bacon:pinkiehappy:

Yep I'm enjoying where this story is heading :pinkiehappy:

Right now, I picture every single pony in Ponyville arriving at the protagonist's house.

Not that it's a bad thing. :rainbowlaugh:

i laughed at the part where he holds in the squeee. make sure to fit a couple more of those types of moments in the story :pinkiehappy:
and please keep on writing it.
but on a side note, i saw you confirm derpy. make sure she stays the way she was intended...:derpytongue2:

Definitely like where this story is going, looking forward to more.:eeyup:

Can't wait for more.

I request him shipping with... NO ONE! FOR ONCE! Really, could somebody please actually do this for once?
...Still calling that he's going to end up with Twilight or Rainbow. As always.

You not should put notes that are obligatory and at the end of the sentence (in parentheses), but in sliver instead. It cloaks it more, and doesn't intrude as much into the actual writing. However, you really shouldn't put things like FORESHADOWING at the end of a sentence anyways, as it still intrudes into the writing, no matter how you put it. We readers arent that dumb, thank you very much. Well, at least not most of us...

I would have a pathological need to take a picture of that.

:heart:,:pinkiehappy:, and:rainbowdetermined2: (As well as:yay:) Describe this story very well. KEEP ROLLIN!

Ok I just...can't read this ;~;

T-there is no room in my heart for...paragraph form stories ;~;

I'M SORRY! BUT ITS LIKE A BREAK UP!

I-I-I-I-I-I :fluttercry: I'm sorry :fluttercry:

Edit after reading story:
OH GOD I READ IT!
BUT ONLY BECAUSE I WANT TO SEE PONY ON EARTH STUFF! OH GOD IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

Hehe. Your inner thoughts are funny. :pinkiecrazy:

847660
I can see it now; Ponies keep "popping" in until his house is wall to wall ponies and then they keep on coming. A guy down the road opens his door the next morning to hear a loud rumble. They look over only to see a house explode with ponies flying everywhere. His final thought before being blind-sided by a falling Bon-Bon is, "Ah, it must be Wednesday."

856453 You sir, deserve five mustaches for that comment. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

He should have to suddenly explain the ponies to his parents. When he wakes up he wakes up to a scream from his mom when Pinkie Pie forgets she can't meet anyone. Then she recongnizes the pink pony from her sons show and she's all like.

"P-P-Pinkie?"

859841 They're few and far between, but I have my moments. :twilightsheepish:

867030 We'll get there soon, don't worry. Besides... I think ponies would be a good reason no matter how good or bad life is.

846966 I like bacon. You get a mustache :moustache:
848702 I think I got that to work... stupid FimFiction uses like... HTML coding instead of just changing the color so I can see it while I write...
848668 I dunno... yeah, those are probably the two most popular and my two favorite... along with Derpy... but I may end this one with no shipping and ship in a sequel. Maybe. We'll see if I can make it that far first.

856453 I just want to say that I re-read the comments today and almost replied to this again. If I hadn't noticed my own comment below, I probably would have given you another mustache. :moustache: I'm such an idiot...:facehoof:

You missed a song. That's like the WORST POSSIBLE THING EVER!:raritycry:

Nice back to the future reference. But really 88 mph that's all well in good for a 1981 DeLorean DMC-12; but rainbow dash broke the light barrier. i mean unless she had a flux capacitor strap to her back and plutonium on her somewhere then she must have broken the light barrier five times before it could happen. :rainbowhuh: but other than that i love the story. it just that moment made me go WTF

876770 Well, I think Twilight was going to comment on that, but I stopped her....

876815 you just didn't want to write a long scientific explanation.

876837 Well, sorta.... that and the fact that hitting 88mph sends you back in time, not to a different dimension...

876934 not unless you have the flux capacitor

"Hey did I ever meet the wonderbots?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

"Not in the shows about you no...But Rainbow I need to ask."

"What?"

"Did you ever ask to join the wonderbolts? I'm sure they're already impressed with you. Maybe just asking will make you one of them."

ADD THAT GOD DAMMIT! :flutterrage:

DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT :rainbowlaugh:

My god i was so happy to wake up and see this sitting at the top of my list waiting to be read. Because of you sir this is going to be a great day just because i got to read another amazing chapter.:pinkiehappy:

At least 10 chapters and I will ba a happy camper!

ALL HAIL QUEEN DERPY.:derpytongue2: anyways. twilight dose seem a little flirty.

877096 I'm glad I could make you happy. And I hope your day ended up better than mine. This was probably the worst day I've had at work.:pinkiesick: Time to read ponies and play video games for the next 5 hours :derpytongue2:

i got so exited when i saw this was out (along with two other stories i follow) adding to the excitement. anyway fantastic job, cant wait for the next one!:pinkiehappy:

but i found the part about luna and socks? very confusing, had to reread a couple times

and :rainbowlaugh: at that awkward moment with twilight

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