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TheSadisticJudge


The Rambling of a Drunken Cat

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Edit: 11/14/16) Before you down vote, wait and give the story a full chance! I don't have the luxury of being vague anymore!

You are Cobalt Fabric and Cobalt Fabric is the perfect pony.

Now this cannot be true, obviously, there is no such thing as perfection. However, you are the perfect pony in this faux reality free from logical thought.
In this faux reality, you are the smartest, the fastest, the strongest, and the most beloved pony in the world.
Blissfully ignorant no longer, you're becoming aware of your fallacies and the two realities you recognize - the one that you refused to accept and the one you created to escape the other.
We both know the reality you chose is fantasy, let's dwell into this twisted perspective until the perfect pony is forced to wake up to the world you refused to accept.

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Comments ( 10 )

This... Is beautiful!

Other than a few errors here and there (nothing some spell checking can't fix) you did a great job!

Can't wait to see this world fall apart at the seams and to fuck with our minds!

for some reason I feel like doing a reading on this, it's just that good

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Haha, thanks mate! That means a lot. :heart:

The errors are a result of my carelessness and MS Word not cooperating with me as I configure the settings, unfortunately I can't fix this MS Word problem right away. The errors in the writing, however, is inexcusable and they will be fixed shortly.

You're waiting for this fake world to fall apart? Who said it will fall apart?
it will be ripped apart by the seams

I don't blame you, I'm actually reading it out loud as we speak and it's quite fun.

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You're welcome!

If you ever need any help or input, throw me a message, I wouldn't mind helping out a story this good

Nnnnhh, my first dislike. I guess I don't have the luxury of being purposefully vague anymore, I must finish the rest of the story quickly before people think this is a Mary-Sue story - which this is the opposite of!
I say, for the record, I purposefully made the beginning bad to reflect on such terrible writing, but I guess being meta ain't gonna cut it with today's critics.
Perhaps it's really as bad as I wrote it out to be, I need to post this new chapter that flips everything upside-down.
Pronto.

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I guess I don't have the luxury of being purposefully vague anymore, I must finish the rest of the story quickly before people think this is a Mary-Sue story - which this is the opposite of!

Be careful about doing a reverse Mary-Sue! You could end up making a Anti-Sue instead. And Anti-Sue's are just as bad, if not worse.

I was about to leave an angry comment, but then I realized what the description means. The development will be interesting if done correctly.

I wish you the best of luck. And may my awesome powers of magic powers and friendship give you the ability to finish the tale of this epic mare. –From: Cobalt Fabric.

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That's a relief.

I wrote this in the process of two hours, perhaps I should have worked on it longer for it to be better.

Thanks, nonetheless! :heart:

I'll be honest, this chapter broke my mind a little.

And so it begins *A smile slowly grows on my face*

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