• Published 25th Oct 2016
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If I'm going down... - Quick Fix



Realising he has no way out against the changelings, Discord decides he's not going to let them have it easy.

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It was a great story, i loved it a lot. 10/10. but i do wanna say that at the first part of the story you forgot to add the word 'them', but still i loved it a lot! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :raritywink:

7671053 Thank you! I was kinda worried about putting this up originally so I really appreciate the kind words. :yay: And thanks for pointing that little error out, fixed it now.

That was bruuuutal.

7671132 That's what happens when you pit a riled up draconequus that can lift Big Mac with ease against unwinnable odds.

Your welcome and I know how it feels to be worried about putting up a story and I'd love to see more stories from you the story to me has a lot of potential :pinkiehappy:

Why doesn't this story have a gore tag?

:flutterrage: FOR ME!

:moustache: for Rarity

:twilightsheepish: for Books!

:duck: for my beauty sleep AND MY SPIKEY WIKEY

:ajsmug: FOR APPLES!

:pinkiehappy: FOR PARTIES!

:rainbowlaugh: FOR AWESOMENESS !

:trollestia: FOR CRYING OUT LOUD...

This was good...

7671330 I personally felt that it didn't go into enough detail to qualify for one. What that says about my mindset is up to you.

7671340 That sir, was pretty damn good too.

I've often thought about Discord in a real fight. This was every bit as glorious as I had envisioned. This made it into my favourites, nice job

7671899 Glad I did it justice. Thank you for both the kind words and the fave! :twilightsmile:

How´s that for a klutzy draconequus, you sons of bitches?! :flutterrage:

Also, the moment I read the premise for this story I knew I had to play this while reading it, and it made it so much awesome than it already is on its own: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2G5rfPISIwo

Anyway, amazing story. I really enjoy short relates dealing with solid and intense, yet brief plot. This one was pretty amazing. The narration was on point describing both the action and the emotions. It is eloquent, but without falling for hubris like a lot of short relates which feel the need to compensate their length with pompous vocabulary when it´s completely unnecessary.
Speaking of which, I love the action. It was quite intense, and it did get my blood pumping.
I also love how quietly Discord goes down at the end, or better said, how quietly the narration describes it. Just blackness, nothing more. That's quite the sad ending for the master of chaos. I wonder how Fluttershy would react to this.
Anyhow, great job. I loved it.

7672623 Wow...Thank you. Seriously, I didn't expect such high praise. I deeply appreciate both it and the fave. And that music choice was perfect.

7672678
When I see something done right I like going into detail as to why I liked it so much.
Seriously though, the moment I read the summary I heard in my mind "You´ll take my life but I´ll take yours too!" And then the song popped into my head.

Oh, I loved that. Really, I enjoyed that Discord wasn't helpless without his powers in the episode, but I was hoping for a bit...more, to be honest. Much like this, something that should Discord as a bit badass if he was ever motivated. After all, the writers have really let his craftiness and intelligence fall to the wayside in Discord epsiodes.

Still, all the same, I'm glad someone else is writing a fic like this. I'm currently have a fic planned/in progress that has a different take on Discord losing his magic to Tirek- lets just say Discord finds the situation hilarious. XP

Until next time, keep up the good work!

7674718 Thank you for the praise and the fave, good sir. Discord does need a good, fresh showing of why he was such a threat originally.

KICK ASS DISCORD IS MY FAVOURITE DISCORD!!!!!

11/10

:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

7676511 Glad you enjoyed such kick ass Discord, good sir! :yay:

That was epic!

I'm glad I finally got to reading this.

Also I love the title.

7980517 Glad you think so! Thank you :yay:

Wooooo go Discord! That was damn awesome

8276320 Glad you thought so mate. ^^

Thanks for the story.
Some could believe that it was a bad characterization of a cornered Discord, but I believe it was spot on: Discord isn't one who is usually known for physically lifting a finger, after all.

9422991 You're welcome, and thanks for faving it!

Excellent story keep up the good work

10805613 Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for giving it a fave!

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