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Apple Bloomers


By the power of my bloomers I will punish you!

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By the power of bloomers! Meet Applebloom, a young filly who dreams of becoming a hero. After an ancient evil awakens it's up to Applebloom to dawn her bloomers and save Equestria, but sometimes its not as easy to save the world as the comic books make it out to be. Does Apple Bloomers have what it takes? New friends and new enemies will join the battle in season one of this episodic magical girl series.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

Huh.. *cocks head* That Cold Blooded Twilight?
*clicks souce* Yep. Shame on you.






We're all shameful horse fuckers.

7649760 let me guess, this artist has done NSFW art? I have only seen this image from this artist

7650120
Uh... not has done so much as... only? I mean you straight linked his tumblr where if you scroll down you'll be hard pressed not to see a giant throbbing BUY SOME APPLES. In fact Im still not too certain whether or not you legitametly did not know or are trolling me.

7650171 I legit didn't know, I just saw the image,liked it, and decided to use it for the cover art

....You seem to have some flow issues here.

Definitely and interesting and original premise. A valiant first story indeed.

7651911 thank you, hope you like the rest when it goes up :pinkiehappy:

I have watched the video, have seen the picture. Now I want to read it's fanfiction. Well done

Wow. Zecora not speaking in rhyme feels a little..... off. :unsuresweetie:

if you need a proofreader, let me know.

7656267 I actually considered having her speak in rhyme but found it too hard :applecry: its an alternate universe...that's my excuse lol

7656315 well if you need help or an editor I'm sure a lot of people have offered but I'll also offer my services as well.

As per your first chapter well this was actually kind of good it reminded me a lot of the old Sailor Moon series and anybody who brings back that old nostalgic nugget instantly gets two ticks-A+ in my book

Oh god it's Sailor Moon meets MLP! Damn it i thought I escaped the awkward boners from my childhood! Sailor Moon why won't you leave me alone!?

Well, am strapped into the plot with its turbooosters.
Riding into blocks of text stacked high as cheese.

p.s. press enter.

note rated M

0/10 WORST FANFIC EVER!!

jk...

Well first impressions are always important. Keep it up.:twilightsmile:

Why have I not discovered this before?

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