Good story, expected more from the ending. 7/10.

I hate mind magic. Celestia did them no favor

What did Celestia try to say? Ughhh, I might be too stupid to understand.
Anyway, good one!

Is there sequel to this? What did Celestia mean?

This. Is. AWESOME. I LOVE IT!!! I'm definetly recommending this to some of my friends! This deserves an infinity/10

“I’m so sorry girls,” I apologized to my friends. “I guess it was a dream, but it felt so real.”

All that excitement for nothing. Come on!

When I had to let my pet, Tank, go into habitation… and I mostly cry in my dream.

I know you may not have heard about the audio drama but that line gives me THS (the heart’s shell) flashbacks

“Rainbow Dash, the whole conflict against Dracula, the vampire apocalypse… it actually happened.”

Quite the plot twist.

“Maybe I should wear a name tag about it. Rainbow Dash, the most loyalist pony ever!”

Bragging yet again, classic rainbow dash

That ending song really fits with this story.

My grading scale is simple:

10/10: might make a fanfic reading or an audio drama of this on my YouTube channel

9/10: still might make a reading on my YouTube channel, but probably not an audio drama.

8/10: adding this to my big favorites library

7/10: adding this to my favorites library, not the big faves

6/10: definitely coming back to this in the future.

5/10: might come back.

4/10: might come back once or twice

3/10: definitely not coming back

2/10: giving criticism about the story

1/10: hating the story overall

Despite all the grammar and everything, this is my final grade: 10/10!!!!!!!

Despite the terrible grammar the plot and story was great so 7/10.