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CONTAINS SPOILERS! SPOILER ALERT!! You have been warned.




After the whole magical ordeal with Gloriosa Daisy, there's time to wind down and reflect on the events that took place in the day.

But thinking too much....can sometimes lead to some rather unsettling answers to question unasked.

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Because crippling debt and the loss of a family heirloom apparently can't be enough motivation for a magical villain, let's throw in everyone's favorite four-letter-word!

Sloppy grimdark, but nothing vitriol-inspiring. It could use another pass with the editor, too.

MJP

gloriosa is evil

MJP

7595534 wait how dop you know shes a villain i just put "gloriosa is evil}" everywere cause its a joke i have with my friends

It wasn't Gloriosa's fault. It was the rich bastard!

I always knew that Capitalists ARE evil!

7595955 Because she's the villain.

MJP

7596317 the film doesnt come out till the 1st

7596320 The Brazilian release was yesterday. It had an option for English language. Some enterprising fan ripped the English version off of TV and uploaded it to Youtube. And then we watched it.

Honestly, when was the last time you saw a fic written about an episode before it even came out that bothered to label itself with spoilers? That would just be silly.

You know, the weird part for me in this is that when I first saw the initial scene where Gloriosa and Filthy Rich stare each other down, I couldn't decide if it looked like they wanted to strangle one another or jump in the sack, :twilightoops:

Oh dear. Feral darling, erm... You might want to go over this little piece of yours. As you said,

Quick, simple, sloppy, rushed and random

, but I do see the potential!

It just needs some...polishing up some. I say this as a friend, dear. Beastie isn't being mean! :raritydespair::raritycry:

At least not trying to be anyway :duck:

...I'm sorry, I have a hard time seeing any incarnation of Filthy Rich as being the sort of person who would abuse or violate anyone.

Then again, him being a greedy pig is a bitter pill to swallow too.

7600512 Hehe, Nah. You're a sweetheart, Beastie ^^ No worries :pinkiehappy::heart:

7595534 I would've loved for some more editorial-esque help with this but only one person was willing to take a gander at it.

Their help was appreciated nonetheless ^^

7600904 Editorials and editors are two very different things.

An editorial is a heavily opinionated piece written by someone for the express purpose of telling you what their opinion on a thing is.

An editor, who does editing, is someone who corrects spelling errors and sentence structure flaws.

7608873 :pinkiegasp: !!!! ..... Awww~! Thank you!!! QuQ:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I appreciate the nice words, my friend ^^

7596317

And Filthy and Timber do a great job of bait and switch for the viewer.

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