• Published 17th Sep 2016
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Violation of Self - The Journals of Princess Luna - Magenta Gleam



After accepting the Tantabus back into herself something strange has been happening to the dreams of Ponyville. Can Luna fix it or will guilt overcome her again?

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3/8/1018 A.D.

Goodbye everypony.

I’m sorry.

Luna.

Comments ( 9 )

I'm confused at the last chapter, did she actually killed herself?

7570623 I think it's left to the imagination of the reader... The implication seems to be that. However I doubt it would happen...

This was a nice concept. I want to mention that it would have been an interesting feature to have her signature fade from formal to the "-L." that you started having. That's just my thoughts on the matter.

7574189 I had considered that but I felt it would make more sense for her signature to resemble her emotional state for each entry because her progression wasn't a direct one.

7574469
Yeah, that makes sense.

hummm...... good work though.

Vik

Very sad, but great story.

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