• Published 22nd Sep 2016
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My little Twily - Bronycommander



A German veteran Of WW1 and WW2 has lost everything. 15 years after the war, he finds a lost unicorn filly

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Epilogue

Epilogue

53 years later

I sat in an office. The DDR was no more, Germany was reunited and I was in charge of a militia. I found out that the Warehouse was real. It was hidden deep in the underground. In the warehouse were enough Weapons to create a new army which I did. It was not easy but I managed to do it.

In the Warehouse were many secret technologies that were able to keep the Wehrmacht gear updated and serviced. My Army was very popular by many young men. I was also a fan of my little pony Friendship is magic. I watched every one of Twilight's adventures and her Friends. Many of my Soldiers were fans too. Even the Soldiers who were not Fans or “Bronys” as the fans were called treated the Bronys with respect.

I was very respected by my men, as I cared for every single one them. For me, they were my new Family. Also, I managed to find Lucas. He, Martin and Toby joined also my militia.

I heard a knock on my Door. “Enter.” Lucas and Paul walked in. They were grown into handsome men. They were two of my best and most loyal soldiers. They wore Wehrmacht uniforms. They both saluted. “At ease.”

“Request permission to speak, Sir.”

“Permission granted.”

“So many years passed since we met her. Sometimes, I wonder if she is still remembering us,” Lucas spoke to me.

“Are you proud of her, Sir?” Paul asked me. Twilight was now an Alicorn and a Princess. How could I not be proud of her?

I don’t know which Twilight I helped, but regardless if it was the Twilight from the canon universe, or the Past Sins universe, or any other universe, I will always be proud of her.

I stood up and looked out of the Window, standing like an military officer would. “Of course, I’m proud Paul. And I will never forget her.”

Author's Note:

End of the Line. I hope you enjoyed my first story.

Comments ( 35 )

7944503 thanks do you mean the Music or what do you exactly? And which Video?
7944509 no but i planing to do a stalingrad fic, a pacific war fic and Vietnam as well as a homefront fic

7982913 thank you, about the stuka, it would be possible to make but it would be a challenge to make it look like one

wow man, I was just looking up "My Little Dashie" with the "Gore" tag and came across one of your stories...
Now this is something i HAVE to read

8141913 the tag is for the Main character's past and a Fight in One of the chapters. Are you already through with it, as your Comment is at the Last chapter?:rainbowhuh:

8141938 no not yet, currently I'm in RAGE MODE because of STUPID "My Little Dashie" RIPOFF

I'll start reading tomorrow :twilightsheepish: it's currently 1222

8141958 ok, i was just Wondering as you Commented on the Last chapter of the Story.

8142112 Another FimFiction bug lol

8143980 okay then, Hope you Enjoy the Story

8144058 Wedding, not Weeding lol

8144063 Oh, right, i will change that right away.

8166837 I know, it's just that it would just one-shot any infantry. PLUS it's not a short range weapon, you just blow yourself up

8166893 i know, the super soldier From Return to Castle wolfenstein uses this weapon, he can use Two to Three weapons at Once.

8166906 one for each finger lol

8166909 he actually uses a Double barrel gun

In the warehouse were enough Weapons to create a new army which I did.

OK, I KNOW that the Warehouse was real but... I thought that Germany had blown it up during The Battle Of Berlin, to keep the Russians from stealing the secret weapons?

He, Toby and Toby joined also my militia.

Toby-Ception

8172261 There was a Warehouse? Never though that, this One was created From an old idea i had

8172263 ah damn, repeated the word. Thanks for pointing that out

8172428 Most of the stuff that was kept ni there was a bunch of Super Tank Prototypes, Like the Panzer VIII Maus, and the ST-1

8172343 It had AVERAGE speed, but a SHERMAN could outrun it

8172503 interesting to know. Eager to See what of my Stories you will Read next.:twilightsmile:

8172508 currently where I am, its 0427, Ihavtago2bednow ;-;

I'll read your stories on my 3DS, and if I am able to comment on that small device, then I will!

8172510 1pm noon in Germany here. Have a Good Sleep and rest.

9438062
Was just a friendly hint, as he wasn't online since then, in case you waited on a reply

Well, for a first story, this was really well-done! It does bear some similarity to My Little Dashie, but definitely emphasizes the characters quite a lot better, much like what I was trying to do with Find Her, Keep Her. So, this was definitely a great way to get yourself off the ground on this site! Nicely done!

9636151
Thank you very much, i apprechiate it. Frankly, as the idea Behind James came From young age, i was Surprised this was received well at all.

It was a good idea to mention the other AUs of MLP.

10815133
Oh alright, then I won't bust your nuts over it too much then. Anyways it's a decent story.

10815186
thank you. i actually tried to recton the gas with an experimental version of it. Was just for me back then, while familiar with the experiments during WW1, the gas seemed like the most possible option how such a change could happen during that time

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