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Jerry wants to go home.

After a game of Truth or Dare, Jerry the former human decides to follow the not so clichè methods of returning to earth.

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ookacha

ookacha #1 · Sep 12th, 2016 · · ·

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OHOOO!

A like!

Time to make more, in a week, or four, or 52...

TieID

TieID #2 · Sep 12th, 2016 · · ·

I liked it, actually. Though I feel that story lacks something, it didn't bother me, like in other situations. I'll leave a like.

ookacha

ookacha #3 · Sep 12th, 2016 · · ·

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Meaning? Proper coherency? Proper backstories? Longer words? Less focus on the comedic elements and more on the dramatic value?

Its missing a lot.

But thats how I intended it to be.

I wanted a good comedy with no distractions.
Oh, and for a person to be magically dumped in Equestria and do what I would probably do.
Probably. As in, Id actually freak out TONS but if I was thinking rationally at all, Id look for Twi and go from there.

Or Pinkie.

Or Discord.

Or Celestia.

Heck, Lyra's probably had enough encounters with humans I might even visit her first...

POINT IS, Id find somepony to help me.

Also, the point is the story is missing many things, but I left em out.

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