Im 15 and I love MLP fanfiction, Full stop.
What would you do if you were sent to a magical place where unicorn, Pegasus, and earth ponies lived in harmony, but the twist is that the leaders have had very bad experience with humans in the past, and you just happen to stumble into their world?
Oh shizzle first fan fiction.
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(Hmmm...i would like to here what happend's next,it got me sucked it but...lot's of cursing lol)
a prity good start)
:D i like it
What happens next???????
A friend of mine once asked me, "AJ, What happened when you got sucked through that portal to Equestria?" My answer? "Cursing. Lots of cursing." Glad to see I'm not the only one. Still,
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:D love it and....first
I can't wait for more! Faved+like
With aJ.
MOAR!
No! Cliffhangers!
I was wondering when this will be updated, but it good, but it short.
>waits MONTHS to update
>chapter less than 1k words
>cliffhanger
You sir, are either a troll, or a scumbag. Or both.
aaaaand 3 1/2 months later... I agree with previous comment. you sir are a
On the plus side, we've got a pissed-off celestia about to go molestia on this guy. LOL
also, more chapters would be most welcome. because if not, 'Shy will cry...
OddOneOut's right. You don't want to make her Fluttercry do you?
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more along the lines of a trollbag..
ALRIGHY THEN.
so when's the next chapter gonna be done? 5 months?
need moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
You what? I'm going to say it, but the whole 'humans are the monsters' in this genre is so fucking overused. Your story good, but the concept is overused.
You have good writing and even though the concept is I'm gonna go with moderately used, but seriously I dunno if your gonna release chapters this short at least write like 5 of them then release them close to each other. I don't know if real life is getting in the way of or your writing or ideas of what should happen next but for the time your releasing them there a little to short. I mean what was that like two scenes
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Remember take every comment you see with a grain of salt, I'm just providing my input on it
. You should never stop writing no matter what anyone says only way to improve whether it be writing style, grammar,ideas,pacing 
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Must have more my friend... MORE
Too shortdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png
Marcus doesn't seem to know what the meaning of "pleading".
DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
curse you
Glad your living your life, and seeing comments like the ones above me should be taken as a compliment
you have fans who really wanna read your story....and they'll stop at nothing to do it 
...like me
Now i know I fucking hate Humans That "magicialy" get teleported into Equestria, but this is odd, i kinda like this one, i dont know why, but i do, I really kinda like this
Damnit, of course the author has a LIFE!
oh bugger
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It happens.