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You deserve an award: Best 1st chapter in the HiE genre 2014-2018. You managed to introduce the main character before taking him to Equestria without any of it feeling (too) forced.
Okay, I'm exaggerating, but still, GJ.
a very nice first chapter actually didn't feel forced or anything like a lot of stories do keep up the good work
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Thanks ^^! I've finally gotten off my lazy ass to finish the chapter, and jut seeing a comment like this does help me a lot. Thank you for the support.
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Ty ^^, Forcing things too quickly kills the mood of the story! ya can’t like the character if he just feels like a cobbled-up HiE copypasta
I wonder where this will go? I’m intrigued.
Thanks batman
Boi chapter por favor me needs it
A very nice start to a HiE. No instant transport and you actually addressed the mental instability of waking up in a new world. The only other story ive seen that in is Misunderstandings by TheRogueWolf. Props to you mate.
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Coming very soon. c:
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I might post a resumation very soon, now that I have risen from the dead. c:
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I look forward to it!