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Twilight's Dusk

[One-Shot] Twilight Sparkle had been ill since the Summer Sun Celebration. Her illness is unknown and is causing disturbances in her life, but even after being crowned Princess of Friendship, she never gave up on herself or the ones around her.

Note: Constructive criticism is highly welcomed!

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Comment posted by Commander Darklight deleted Oct 26th, 2016

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Deactivated-UsingToRead #2 · Sep 29th, 2016 · · ·

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It seems like I forgot to remove that part, there was an explanation for it originally, but I shortened the entire story to a One-Shot since the chapters were quite short and rushed. If I make time, a sequel would be possible but not very likely.

Commander Darklight

Commander Darklight #3 · Sep 29th, 2016 · · ·

7604958 what was the reason for her ascension in this story anyway and was the ending happy

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #4 · Sep 29th, 2016 · · ·

"illness".

Looks like we missed one. Third section—the period goes inside the quote.

Also, suggestion for the description:

Her illness is unknown and is causing disturbances in her life, but even after being crowned Princess of Friendship, she never gave up on herself or the ones around her.

I'd also take this...