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Autumn Jade


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Twilight attempts to commit suicide after convincing herself it is the right thing to do. Rarity doesn't take this lightly.

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This ended rather abruptly but it was good though I would say the waking up part felt rushed. Keep up the good work.

Well...bye.:rainbowkiss:

9011247
Thanks lol. I know it does but I wrote this at 3am lol

9011982
Bai! Have a good day!

I really liked this story. :twilightsmile: Wish it was longer though. :applejackunsure:

The feelz, man...... the feelz.

9012259
Is this anthro? Cause it's written like it is.

9018594
No, just a story of depression set in like season 6

9018687
No, whst I mean, it's written like they're human. You use human terms rather than one terms. You use wrists and arms instead of hooves and fore legs.

9018695
Ooh. No, they are ponies, lol.

9018700
Ok, was just making sure lol

9018710 I can personally see a spin off story coming from this with the mane 6, spike and the other princesses helping twilight with treatment for her problems (especially luna and cadance on the mental side of things)

9249742
I might make a sequel

This hit the heart.

It was good. Just seemed a bit rushed. Also one minor nitpick I have is that it's quite rude to say "commit suicide," though it works in Twilight's head. Maybe say something like"kill herself" instead?

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