A Humanized My Little Pony Story brought to you from TalesFromEqeustria
The Mane Six are going their separate ways. Flutershy is Studying Zoology at one collage, Rarity going to a design school, Twilight is going to Canterlot for her final years at school, and to finish up her magic training. Pinkie is traveling as a party master helping Equestrians everywhere with their party needs, Dashie has finally joined the Wounder Bolts and has to travel across Equestria for a little before she becomes a full fledged member. And Lastly AJ Decides to stay on the Ranch and continue life normally.
But Beyond all that, they kept a promise, No matter where they are or what shall happen, They shall be friends forever.
Story From Twilight Sparkle's position.
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will read as soon as i get back from the supermarket~
Im editing comment as i read.
Found a little typo. "And lastly their was her and spike" there*
another one "They new one day they would have to split" knew*
"yeesh, dress are to constricting" the structure here is a little off.
"Twilight took on last look of her friends" one last look at her friends?
Done, besides from the few grammatical errors and typos, it's a good story.
Look it over once or twice, edit a few things and it will be perfect :)
tracked, i want to see where this goes
796407 he also said dah had "hands" otherwise pretty decent, seems realistic but i think twilight shouldent be attending college she already is the most powerful unicorn in the world, you could say that she was required to become a teacher for magically powerful unicorns
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i just assumed it was a humanized story.
And, well, considering that she will now be learning spells directly under Celestia, i found nothing wrong with that, but it's all about perspective and preference, no?
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Think of it as Twilight has her lower-level courses done, and is now going for her degree. Bachelors, Masters or PhD?
796614 not a bad way to put it
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796407 Yeah, sorry about the errors, I had my friend Flamewing look it over before posting it, and her her self isn't a good editor, she just helped with the apple jack parts. But I am really glad you like it
also sorry for not stating it was humanized, thought the whole cover pic and archive part would take care of it.
796614 Shes Going to college because she saw how much more she could learn. I still haven't decided what she was going to major in, Was going to decide that in chapter two.
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there were so few errors so it's all K.
and i assumed from said Picture that it was humanized so no harm done there :3
i'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
798891 Thanks, Working on chapter two right now, hope you enjoy it
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Great!
and if you need someone to double check for errors, don't hesitate to give me a pm, i'd love to help. + it's good practice.
Good luck with the chapter though, hope you get it done soon
798946 Thanks, when I am done with this chapter I will send it to you for some editing
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Do eet~
i take it you use googledocs?
gonna send you a quick PM with minor questions, so i don't bump the comments to no end, the Mods don't like that.
A nice, easy start.
And then, reality sets in...
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Hmmm. I'm not sure what to think about this. The beginning is good and simple but it is missing a good hook. I'll come back to see where this might go but that in and of itself is usually less than needed to keep consistent readers.
were is spike?
847516 Spike will get his official appearance next chapter
Wow. Blade, better work please?
I haven't even started the story and I see like 6 typos.
1016595 read the story First, and you know I dont have good grammar. If you paid attention to plot more or less you would maybe not criticize my un-edited parts. I hope you enjoy the story.
I take it Lightning Blade is to Twilight as Blueblood is to Rarity?
Well, this is getting interesting. I however have a few corrections for you, for example beeted, is beated. "It" would be it in this case. Brings, is brang, otherwise, nice start.