• Member Since 8th Jun, 2016
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TaylorTheFailure


I'm done. I just don't have fun writing stuff anymore. You're free to take any of this material as your own. Have fun!

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When I was young, my father left my mother, brother and I. We fell into poverty and lived on the streets for years. After I had experienced enough of watching the rest of my family suffer, I took action into my own hooves. I began to take from those who were filled with greed, and gave it to those who needed it most, my family.

Unfortunately, it wasn't enough to help them though, as my brother was taken away and my Mom was infected by a fatal virus. I was all alone. I didn't know what else to do afterwards, other than what I had been doing, stealing. I continued to take for most of my years. I had done it since I was a colt, so I became more and more efficient. I even gained a bit of reputation.

But one day, on a special theft operation, I was exposed to some unspeakable magic that granted me powers of telepathy and telekinesis. When I was able to harness these abilities, I strove for a much bigger target than petty theft. I wanted revenge, not only from my father, but Equestria for having taken the ones I loved.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

AGH! Too short, it feels like I got teased with the prospect of a new chapter and then it just cut off suddenly.

7629418 Whoops' I'll take it down for "maintanence" and then ill put it back up

7642226 Yeah, I put a lot of effort into this story. I really liked the premise and haven't read anything similar to it so I thought it would be pretty interesting. I just wish more people could read it. I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far! :pinkiehappy:

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