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Nameless Narrator


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This story is a sequel to Dawn Of The Silver Sun


A murdered guard, raised from the dead and forced to serve her new master. Only one of many cases of dark magic abuse rapidly appearing all over Equestria.

What is that? Nopony knows.

A depressed griffon, reeling from the death of his lover. The griffon's unicorn assistant, not so secretly pining after her boss. Three new recruits about to become the special unit meant to protect the innocents. All those will clash in the struggle for power, immortality, and fulfilling their own desires.

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 246 )

Aaaaand that's why you never take the last job on a friday alone folks! Mad, power-hungry warlock rapists might be out for some plot! :rainbowlaugh:

... might wanna add the sex tag if you're gonna make references like that, just so the admins don't get on your back.

7336137 Nah, sex is and will not be significant in any way so it would just be misleading. Also, you forgot one - mad power-hungry, necrophile warlock rapists.

Friday, Friday, gonna get down on Friday... :moustache:

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Ah, how could I forget the necrophillia!? :rainbowhuh:

I must be off my game if I forgot that. :facehoof:

Hoooo boy, these newbies sound like they'll be a handful

7348087 Ha! I get it, because two of them have HANDS! :facehoof:

I'll see myself out. :twilightblush:

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Dear princess Celestia,

the minotaur you sent us arrived in a terrible condition, all smooshed up and with some limbs missing.
We totally had nothing to do with it, her box must have had too little padding.
Please send a replacement, hopefully via different company than DerpEx, thank you.
Also, how is the love potion strong enough to break a griffon infused with divine power going?

with something remotely similar to respect,
Contradiction

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Celestia: Oh dear, this just won't do.*picks up a scroll* Dear Twilight... :trollestia:

Sex tag?

If shield is gonna have an orgasm every time her master touches her you're gonna want to add that...

7381621 NEVER!

It's all just your imagination, the commands only make Black Shield very itchy and her tail go 'bzzzt!' like Pinkie during a Pinkie sense episode. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. :moustache:

Also, Contradiction DID NOT literally molest a minotaur in this chapter, and there was no mention of past torture or abuse of a somewhat adult even more somewhat mare.

No, seriously for a moment - I added sex tag to my stories where it was a driving force (Imbalanced: After Dark, Corrupted Lands), but I won't be adding it to each story that mentions a nipple or bouncy butt. If I did that, my entire library would look like clop.

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Dear Princess Celestia,

Today my master made me murder an old mare and then rutted my brains out over her corpse, all of this was after he told me that I was his zombie sLAve... sorry, I just get weird stuff happening to my... places whenever that word is used.

With something similar to respect,
Black Shield

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Dear Twilight,

How many times have I told you not to give my dragonfire number to your friends? I've been recieving some seriously strange letters recently. I suspect either Pinkie Pie (you know how she can get when she takes too much "sugar") or one of Rainbow Dash's pranks.

No matter which it is, I want you to sort this out. I am currently busy stuffing my face with cake (Yes, this time it really IS cake and my face. Shove it! You catch me ONCE and I never hear the end of it). If you want to keep your wings (And horn. Don't make me mad.) you better make sure this doesn't happen again.

Her Royal Majesty who can literally end all life on this planet with a thought (in case you didn't get the hint),
Princess Celestia, the alicorn of the Sun.

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Dear Princess Celestia

I did not give out your dragon fire number to anypony, I'm sure it was just your imagination. (Just like you imagined not giving head to that guard, but I digress.) Pinkie had been off her "sugar" for weeks now and is finally getting over her withdrawal symptoms (her suppliers are awaiting my... inspection in the dungeons.)

Her royal majesty who does much more than you, and has the elements of harmony at her beck and call,

Princess Twilight Sparkle

"Oh stars this place smells like a whorsehouse in heat!" after a while, Secret Seeker's eyes bulged and nostrils flared, "What are you doing?"

Why the hell are you complaining? :rainbowwild:

7402526 Pretty sure Secret Seeker has different things on his mind, something like how not to get splattered by two alicorns when stuff happens.

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Still... If I were an evil megalomaniac, I'd probably want to smell like I just did the nasty with my smexy slave/assasin/concubine everywhere I went! :pinkiehappy:

7423839 Sigh, now I feel as if I did a bad job. :applecry:

Well, in two chapters Shield is going to make Crom and Connie very, very mad and realize she might need some more enhancements.

7442900 exactly for what Celestia said. No one says the powerful enchantment can't be twisted into something different.

7443005

I meant what the villains are gonna use it for...

7443014 I'm pretty sure Secret Seeker just doesn't want to catch something nasty while banging his undead and totally not rotting at all protector/toy. After all, who's to say he won't add a venomous bite or tail to her or something equally nasty she might 'accidentally' use against him.

All just a speculation, though.

7443138

All I know is that it suddenly smells like a brothel in heat here...

7461643 Welcome to the chapter where EVERYONE on all sides gets shafted :D

7462700

Eh, Shield's probably gonna get more shafted in EVERY definition of the word...

7462911 Seeker's gotta be pretty good at stitching to sow all her pieces back together. Secret Seamstress, the real name.

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That's not what I meant and you know it...

Dear Princess Celestia,

Today I learned that Master enhanced my ass to have more jiggle to it when he does me every day, also, I got a new tail. (I miss my fluffy pone one tho...)

with something resembling respect
Black Sheild

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Dear Black Shield,

I find the mere idea that you could send a message without me knowing about it absurd. On the other hoof, the fault is all mine for expecting more from a mudpony. It is beyond your muscle-controlled brain to understand the intricacies of my magic and the ease with which I can control you and monitor the surroundings of my laboratory.

However, since you do not seem to listen, let me make one thing clear - the squishiness of your plot is no concern of mine and merely a side effect of potions and muscle-enhancing surgeries. And regarding the topic of our fairly infrequent, yes that is the key word - INFREQUENT, OCCASIONAL, RARE, ENJOYAB NECESSARY, conduct... I refute your allegations that any and all enhancements I do to your body are for my enjoyment and not for furthering of ponykind's knowledge of surgery.

With complete control over your body, which is the only relevant thing to your being, and growing annoynace especially since you never stop mumbling the damn word and making my lab slippery and smelly (seriously, I nearly broke my leg yesterday),
your owner, Secret Seeker

PS: Your old tail was ugly.

PPS: Why am I writing this when you're RIGHT THERE in the corner, lounging with a book titled: Telekinesis for Dummies? Is your earthpony lack of intellect rubbing off me?

Is this story canon to Imbalanced?

7813048 Yes, it is. Pretty much everything I write is set in that universe, though not everything is relevant to Blazing's storyline.

Is it possible for you to accept an idea? A unicorn that's using black magic to stop the other dark casters? I haven't even read it yet, by that was an idea i got just from the description.

7827520 As an idea for a change in this story? No, this story is almost over so I can't really work in a major change.

As an idea for a new story? Maybe, although the theme of someone good being seen as evil is in a bunch of my stories about Blazing Light already. (just check my story list)

7827662 Ok! I was actually suggesting it as a kind of add in. Not someone who's seen as evil, bit is genuinely evil but swore an oath to someone he loved to help protect those that he could from black magic however he saw fit, and as such, is an antihero.

7827665 Then no, I can't. As I said, this story is almost over and a change of this magnitude is impossible to do at this point. I've had an idea for such a character, though, and I might use him in some new story later. Sorry.

7827672 Nah man, it's all good! So long as you already had an idea similar, or the exact same, as that then I don't mind!

Bwaha-!

"BED, you little devil!" Anvil barked, making Bubbles dig herself under Astray's blanket.

That killed me! Gg man!

Uh... Uh... Uh... Stay away from me Contradiction! I never want to be around you when that pissed! *shudders*

Damn Connie... I knew that you were taxed in the last chapter, but this is insane...

Damn... So that thing possessed her?

7830434 You might want to read Dawn of the Silver Sun afterwards, or before, or maybe inbetween updates :P

All stories (with the exception of Happiness is What You Make Of It) are a part of a singular storyline, although Silver Sun stuff SHOULD be possible to read out of context, at least I tried for it to be, but you might lose a lot.

Noooo! When's the next bit...

7831705 Soon-ish, I hope. As I wrote before, though, you can check the other Silver Sun story in the meantime. If you're still interested, that is.

7832040 this one I must finish first before I move onto other bird of that multiverse.

7832531 Dawn of the Silver Sun happens before Shine. Plus, it'll be at least a week before next chapter.

7832634 don't care. I need to finish this off first before I read the previous and variation books. In the meantime, have a follower for getting using hook, line, and sinker.

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