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Alsvid


Virginibus puerisque canto. - Horace | O tempora, o mores! - Cicero | Ex Africa semper aliquid novi. - Pliny The Elder

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hmm...admittedly you could add in the motions of her massaging him, get into more detail as to losen his knots-- and hit the sweet spots. don't know why you used time skip so quickly, but it was a decent fic.

7326059

Thanks!

It was a surprise Present, so I wanted to get it out the door quickly.

I'll probably do a George Lucas type thing and expand on it later.

7326066 okay. still it's not a bad fic...just a 'meh' to me.

7326086

Say, man, the most important thing is that you read it. For that I thank you. :pinkiehappy:

Hope you stick around for more.

7326095

Thank you very much, birthday boy. :3

7326118

Imgur no werk on FIMfic bruh

7326122 I hate this site.

"Lewd, but I approve."

7326097 maybe, have other things to do you know. But thanks for the watch...even if it was just giving my opinion.

Meeester
Moderator

What does this have to do with MLP? How is this any different from just a random anthro furry fic?

7327049

I shall make my drift apparent in the next chapter, Sir Meeeeeeester, have no fear.

Meeester
Moderator

7327052
Then you can resubmit it when that chapter is done.

7327056

I had actually intended on including these details in the first chapter, but I derped and got carried away by the HOT SAIX.

Sorry. Dumb of me, I know. The idea is that she gives Ponyville residents intense sexual massages, like in the Japanese Animes.

I thought I had made this clear, but I apparently got more into the SAIX.

NOW LET'S DO THE SAIX (just kidding)

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ALSO OMFG MEEESTER COMMENTED ON MUH STORY. I ARE FIMFIC CELEBRITY.

I am so freaking hot right now.

7329328

Wut u say

[Wiggly EYEBROWS]

7329367 I'm hot from all this guy on zebra action foreplay. Loving the way she's got him squirming under her touch. Plus this is the only fic were the main character isn't white or black.

Read quite a few and most of them have the same racial ethnicity.

Plus the anthro zebra with good assets make this whole fic.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Burst

Check this guy's fics out sometime if that sort of thing tickles your pickle. You'll love him.

7334084 huh, look at that. A fic with the main character that's Mexican, and with such realism of his struggles as an alien outcast within the first chapter.

Not gonna lie ,it seems unorthodox, but I like it because of that.

7338331

Thank you!
I was inspired after all the big Fandom jokes about Zecora tricking Twilight into drinking a bottle of cum.

Twilight should just stop hanging out with Zebra mares. :rainbowlaugh:

I ain't saying nothing, but this may not be the last time poor little Twi ends up swallowing some....uh...milk.

7338372 This is the scene in question:

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You should totes-ma-goats do a version based on the last chapter, or just a picture of Twilight drinking a suspicious bottle while Alsvid and Leo are giggling.

7338412

Haha, no, I was making a joke. It's a show for little girls, so of course there's a scene where Zecora has Twilight drink a bottle of semen magic potion. :rainbowlaugh: That totally makes sense, right? Family-friendly entertainment, eh? :trollestia:

*snicker* wow, I can't beleive she fell for that...*looks to down votes* odd. it's all down...*shrug* eh, some people may not get it or like it.

7338429

Wow, people are really enjoying that last little vignette with Twilight and the Old Milk. :rainbowlaugh: Thanks. It was just a little throwaway gag I put in on the spur of the moment, but if you guys like that...

7871282

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! That is what I was agonizing over for a very long time; I wanted to capture that sense of them being alive and into each other, without just mechanically showing a sex scene. I wanted their love to burn like a fire and stir the reader's emotions.

I also wanted this to be a soothing, healing balm to the one who reads it.

I actually spent some time crying over their passionate dialogue, it was so touching, it seemed to me.

I wanted to get this chapter out quickly so I didn't get to expand on their next romantic interlude, but they aren't done. Look out for their next moves. It will be great.

7871328

Listen, listen! I have continued it, against all odds, against the despair and dread that consumed me the past month and a half.

Mmm. I'd give an arm and a leg to be Leo, the way you describe this zebra chick is something from my wettest dreams. Also, you always seem to describe Leo as this perfect Adonis that you seem to have a crush on.

Thx author, fer you are my inspiration of a greentext story on a satyr thread

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