Huh.......well then..,.....

Also, welcome back!!!!

Yes, it is back!! But this chapter is to short for my liking

Short, that's ok. Just glad this is back.

For some reason, I get the feeling that Jack doesn't like Celestia, and vise versa. And I don't know why.

The formatting is weird, don't do center aligned.

Also, it's spelled 'gala' not 'galla'

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
12:23_6/20/2017

My dark heart cherish this chapter ☢

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thanks

8244954 don't worry it will be explained in later chapters!s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/c9/da/80/c9da8038ac0fcf75ad6d2061d80a6262.png

So uhm is this story dead or just resting ?
Sorry to bother I just saw last update a year ago and its quiet since then so I was curious.

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More or less resting I just been busy and forgot about it plays my editor flaked out on me so that's a thing

I got to say this is probably one of my favorite stories I've read with an OP character. I hope to read more from it my man! Also, Senso is awesome.

Hey, bud, nice story you have here. It would be pretty awesome if you could continue it! However, no offence but it seems you're in desperate need of an editor/proofreader who knows what they're doing. All of the chapters need looking over.

That being said, good job on this so far, and I'm quite sad that you haven't continued it in so long. Here's to hoping you get back on the horse.

Love,

Nito <3