Jack smiled as he placed the girl down. “Alright you crazy ass ball of cotton candy. you’ll see me there, promise.” With that, the young mare squeed and rushed out of Jack's bar in at unthinkable speeds, leaving behind a pink blur in her wake. .
7713092 something tells me Jack will see more of Celestia, wether he likes it or not after he is done training the new and/or joins the new Eclipse team
7713657 Could've made another system and based it on how you think magic works instead of a belief about how fictional life energy moves around the body. Also it makes me think about Naruto, and I don't want to think about Naruto.
7719369 ok no problem with it but heads up moat often the human tab mean there often a lone or small amount of human for another world in the story not a human EQ so a warning should help stop those who did not know from complaning
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7713035 thanks
7713042 I was kind of going for that feel, glad you liked it.
Not bad, but you called Pinkie a mare when she left Jack's place
7713060 were I don't see it?
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7713076 that was intentional don't worry. Thanks for the favorite btw
So basically you applied the 8 gates of chi or whatever from that Asian religion to magic.
7713092 something tells me Jack will see more of Celestia, wether he likes it or not after he is done training the new and/or joins the new Eclipse team
7713342 yes actually. I personally thought would be cool.
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Could've made another system and based it on how you think magic works instead of a belief about how fictional life energy moves around the body.
Also it makes me think about Naruto, and I don't want to think about Naruto.
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...*eye twitch*
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so this is a human EQ?
7719361 yes.
7719369 ok no problem with it but heads up moat often the human tab mean there often a lone or small amount of human for another world in the story not a human EQ so a warning should help stop those who did not know from complaning
I can't handle all the poor spelling. I will read this no further.