Jack wondered if she was a douchebag, after all the only people Jack knew that wore sunglasses inside were douchebags or the blind and she didn’t look blind.
Love. It.
I like how you made Shade. She is still transitioning from her past and has a chip on her shoulder. She is edgy. And I am glad Jack didn't beat her to a bloody pulp.
You call her Jade once and there are plenty of other grammar and spelling errors. Other than that, I dig it. I can't wait to see what Jack turns her into.
7785187 Glad you liked it. i was worried that i would mess up her character. And thanks for telling me about the grammar fails, i miss them sometimes. I wright my chapters in the middle of the night, it helps me think.
Love. It.
I like how you made Shade. She is still transitioning from her past and has a chip on her shoulder. She is edgy. And I am glad Jack didn't beat her to a bloody pulp.
You call her Jade once and there are plenty of other grammar and spelling errors. Other than that, I dig it. I can't wait to see what Jack turns her into.
7785187 Glad you liked it. i was worried that i would mess up her character. And thanks for telling me about the grammar fails, i miss them sometimes. I wright my chapters in the middle of the night, it helps me think.
That was Awesome to read. Can't wait to see who's next. (Fingers crossed)
7863202 k, just something to fix in the future thanks for the info.
Aww... I was hoping she’d alwaysbe that one guard kid who thinks she’s better than everyone else and keeps getting shown up
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you know i might add one now