Most off-putting part: "pride". Every mention of his penis before the sex uses the one term, but all mentions during sex use more typical synonyms.

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I only saw one mistake, you accidentally spelled what as waht, a simple ctrl-f should find it. Other than that I thought it was good overall.

7277881 Thanks for telling me

Then twilight finds out humans don't have a heat season and she is pregnant