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Midnight Phoenix


I occasionally write clopfics, but sometimes I'll try something new. I love listening to country and rap music. Pegasi and Changelings are the best.

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10/10
Wow.
And this is only the first chapter.
I hereby award you a spike.
:moustache:

Damn, you're a good writer.

How has this not exploded with popularity yet?

I actually have a Fender guitar and amplifier. I'm not all that good though

Oh my celestia :trollestia:, if I didn't read the third chapter, I would have gone insane!:rainbowderp:
In the real life, $5,000 is decent for equipment, which got me pissed off that Dashie x Reader got trapped in a cliche sabotage. So, basically, I'm glad that there was a resolution to the problem, or else I wouldn't be able to sleep tonight at all.. :raritydespair:
I play as first chair trumpet and baritone prince of choir, and I'd be pissed if borrowed equipment was broken and that I'd have to pay a small loan of a million bits just to make sure it didn't happen at all.. :pinkiecrazy:

7135947 Continue the story to finds out the destiny of the two! :trollestia::pinkiehappy:
7136465 Agreed very much! :trollestia:

Comment posted by Midnight Phoenix deleted May 3rd, 2016

7137993 hey i'm first chair trumpet for my band to im also trumpet section leader as well as french horns

Need an editor?

7282926 No, but thanks for the offer. Right now what I really need is a cover artist.

This seriously needs an editor, the paragraphing is insane. Other than that, It's quite nice!

7285723 Yeah, I agree I failed on the paragraphing a bit, its hard knowing when to put spaces between topics.

Throughout this chapter I was just thinking NERDS and GEEKS. also if you. going to throw in a song then im gonna need a beat to read/sing it to

Am I the only one that feels like this was rushed?

7313267 Ok, I admit the third chapter was a bit rushed, but you can't say all of it was disappointing.

7317139 I CAN say that im dissapointed :ajbemused: But then I would be lying :pinkiehappy:

I went to sleep without locking the outside door to my house? Wow, I must live in Canada.

Wait, What the hell? Who leaves professional equipment alone??? Teenagers! 'Dem damn teenagers, goin' through a cycle 'n' shit. :/

Good God! The long paragraphs are savage! Good story though!

"Well if that's all, then I guess there's no need to be mad, just next time you have a science quiz, let [Twilight] win."

If she throws an attempt to trump me, then I'll give it my all. Like I do with everyone. Sorry that your gal got butt hurt over knowing that there's someone just as smart as her, but that's her own fault. You really want to physically fight me over facts?

"Oh, I'm sorry, but in case I didn't make myself clear, lemme say it again. We owe $7,000! The instruments are all but fucked up, and we dont know who did this! So I'm to interrupt your little fantasy, but I'd like to welcome you to reality. And the reality is, this whole thing is fucked! If you and you're stupid little dream hadn't gotten into my life, I'd be fine! All this is your fucking fault!" Your friend exploded in rage, maybe a little too much. Rainbow looked at him, then at you, and then left in tears. Your feelings for Rainbow kick in and your first reaction is to smack the hell out of your friend.

I wouldn't hurt my friends, but I would tell him that money is a matter of time. And that I'm going to personally hunt the assholes who did that damage, rearrange their underparts so they all pee sideways, and then force them to either pay me or get turned in to the cops.

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