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Erisn


If a Slenderman falls in the forest, does anyone care?

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Season 6 Spoilers!

Trashcans. They always show up and crimp Rainbow Dash's style. Not once, but twice now they've ruined her chance to impress. Bad luck, or is it part of a larger conspiracy?

Rainbow Dash's hunch leads her to investigate the sinister appearance of these receptacles of garbage. What she uncovers will change her life. Forever.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Yes, this is what everyone should be focusing on. Where do these trashcans keep coming from? Funny story, if not downright odd.

Just as fucking stupid as the episode it's following up.

OK, this is amazing. Seriously.

This was also amazing. Loved the Scootertrix shout-out. Also I love how trying to uncover why a trashcan was somewhere, ends up uncovering an elaborate time-travel conspiracy.

Why doesn't this story have a comedy tag?

Illuminati confirmed!

7196071
I never know how to tag stories like this. On one hand, it's got some comedy in it, but there are some dark parts as well. Would you put this as a Comedy-Random-Mystery or something else?

:moustache: When you need a vacation away from it all. . .
:duck: RACALL RECALL RECALL
:rainbowderp: I'm a Mareshin spy?
:facehoof: Wrong show!
:pinkiegasp: Space Balls?
:ajbemused: Pinkie!
:derpytongue2: I forgot............My bad!:twilightoops:

Oh wow! I knew it. time traveling trash cans, well I was close enough.

What a twist!

I loved that you focused on this and in an interesting way that still makes sense.

Very interesting story. I liked the way you chose Starlight to be in the organization at the end of the first chapter, it was very intriguing. But I just have one suggestion to make:

“Hey, if you’re going to make a mess, go big or fly home is what I say.”

I think you should've said fly big, but remember that it's just a suggestion.

7196142
Well, I would.

Good story, by the way.

Idea:
You could merge the two pictures of RD hitting a trashcan into one pic and use that as cover instead this single one.

7196142 What about Comedy-Random-Mystery-Dark? That's what I'd do.

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Good points. I usually don't like doing too many tags, but this one does hit all those genres. Tags updated! Also, I would do a different picture if I could, but my photoshop skills are nonexistent. Screen captures are the best I can do.

Pretty dang amazing story. :raritywink: God job.

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