• Published 5th May 2016
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Luna's Birthday - nebulaegalaxy



It's Luna's birthday, and it seems like everypony forgot...Again.

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Bonus: Family Party

Even though there were only eleven out of the twelve invited guests, Luna was having a lot of fun. All the people she cared about most were there. Her sister, her adoptive niece and her husband, Twilight Sparkle and her friends, and Spike. Although Blueblood was invited, he didn’t have time to come to his adoptive aunt’s birthday party. He was busy preparing for an event that was going to take place later that week.

Oh well, Luna thought. At least he wanted too.

The party had just begun when Celestia pulled Luna to the side.

“What do you need, Celestia?” Luna asked.

“To give you your gift. I didn’t get the chance to last night,” Celestia answered. She then gave a box to Luna. It had simple navy wrapping paper.

“Tia…”

“Open it when you’re ready,” was Celestia’s response as she went headed back towards the rest of the guests. Luna had waited until she couldn’t see her sister, then carefully unwrapped the gift.

Inside the box was a simple crescent necklace.

Luna lifted it out of the box so as to study it. She turned it over. What was engraved on the back made her cry.

I love you to the moon and back.

The simple gift from her sister was the one Luna loved the most out of all the things she got that night.

Author's Note:

For those curious about the party she had with her family.
The gifts from her other family members
Twilight got her a book.
Fluttershy got her a stuffed animal(wolf).
Rainbow got her a picture(of herself obviously).
Pinkie got her a moon-shaped pillow(Don't ask, it's Pinkie).
Applejack got her some apple cider.
Rarity got her a simple dress.
Cadence and Shining got her some rock candy.
And Spike got her a comic book.

Comments ( 47 )

This is super good. Thank you fluffy

Amazing start

very tender and sweet well done !!

Congrats making it into the popular stories column!

7192966

It's quite an achievement, especially for your first story. Very well done :twilightsmile:

7192976 I won't lie, I was a bit surprised. If it ends up featured, which I doubt, I'll probably die of excitement.

7192979

But then how will you write a second story for me to read?... :rainbowhuh:

7192981 Maybe I'll have another one ready? I don't know

Great first story! Really enjoyed it.

Not bad. Could've used a bit more build up but otherwise a great story.:raritywink:

Even though there were only eleven out of the twelve invited guests, Luna was having alot of fun.

Even though there were only eleven out of the twelve invited guests, Luna was having a lot of fun.

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7333899 Both have been corrected, thank you

According to The Journal of the Two Sisters, Luna hates reading, so I doubt she liked Twilight's gift very much. XD Unless it was by the Brumbies Grimm. The Brothers Grimm wrote some seriously fucked up fairy tales.

7525950 I know, I have a collection of them.
And maybe it is XD

And you say you're a bad writer?

7703541 Girl, you made me laugh and cry in the same paragraph! That takes skill!

7703572 The part where Luna was arguing with Tia.

I loved this story <3 you're a better writer than I am :P (don't have anything posted here, just some stories back in FanFiction.net)

8313663
aAAAAAHH NO I'M A TERRIBLE WRITER

8313670
NO YOU'RE NOT! XD I'd take an eternity to even write something like this. Plus one of my friends tells me I'm a bad writer as the few attempts I've made at writting a MLP fic have ended with Sombra being brought back (or never getting defeated in the first place) and being with Luna XD hahahaha Can't seem to write about anything else

8313796
Lunombra shipper then? ;P

Anyway, I only wrote this in like an hour because I was pressed for time and it was my friend's bday

8313818
Lunombra shipper indeed, to the point of coming up with a plot for a story within Sombra's universe from the season 5 finale, but unable to write anything past it that makes any sense XD

For a story written within an hour, it's still pretty good. I have taken days and months even to write something decent of any fandom, and most times I delete it the day after posting as I can't stand seeing it :twilightblush:

8313866
I know a guy
Who writes pretty good Lunombra

U should check her out

if u want cuz idk

8313912
Hand over the name now or be prepared to face the wrath of my kitten! *looks at kitten asleep on the couch* .... he might be asleep but he will attack, umm... using cuteness? :rainbowlaugh:

8313931
Thanks! You're saved from a kitten attack :rainbowlaugh:

8314030
Though Felix would probably only look at you and then mew till you pet him :rainbowlaugh: That would be his idea of "attack"

8314065
aaaaaww

I should have chosen the kitty attack

8314938
You can still get it :derpytongue2: *makes Felix "attack" you*

8315248
*pets the precious kitty*

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Felix: *purrs and mews, enjoying being pet* :heart:

8315269
and that's what you face when I menace someone with having my kitten attack them :rainbowlaugh:

8315277
kittens are da best yo

I wish I got a picture of myself.

9058007
why are you reading my oldest story kjsadhbgf it's trash

9058041
I read nearly anything. I read the sequel too.

9058047
that's self indulgent trash

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