Sunset Shimmer rules over the kingdom of Canterlot. She is hated and feared by all of her subjects. At her side stands Flash Sentry, her most trusted guard...and childhood friend. He would do anything for his princess, even taking a life.
Fluttershy lives in the quaint little village of Ponyville. Shunned by the villagers, she lives by herself in her cottage near the forest. One day, while in the forest, she stumbles across an unconscious alicorn. The two become the best of friends.
The paths of these ponies will cross in the worst way possible.
Based off of these YT PMVs:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=chu4k5NSX3A
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeJyR3tGBZw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gdjk9BXTO7c
(With a few twists, of course)
Chapters (4)
Interesting start. I wish a little more had happened in the first chapter, but it's still interesting. I'll track this.
7108247 More is definitely coming. Thank you for tracking. I hope I will interest you until the end.
7108296 You're welcome. Sounds good to me.
Interesting premise. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
This is really rushed...and I'm surprised Sunset is falling so quickly...is this gonna be a short story?
7125007
Yeah it is...
Like 4 chapters.
But the reason Sunset gave in so willingly will be explained. Don't worry. That wasn't an accident.
7125890 Oh...okay.
7125901 I'm trying to do the whole Seven Sins Series, so like the series itself, I try to make it short. (That and I don't have much time but a lot of ideas
)
7125906
That's like over half the authors on this site, you're not alone. Same with me.
? What just happened?
7227469 Question: have you been watching the videos?
Can I hope for some Sunshyne? If not, okay then. This fic is interesting one way or another.
7228278 No, no Sunshy. Sorry.
But I thank you for your interest.
7228299
Oh well. You're welcome. Keep the good job.
7228332 There's really only one chapter left in this one.
7227487 Are you saying that you need to watch the videos to understand what's going on? If so then you should really let us know that...
7230551 Not necessarily but you'll get a better understand if you watch them. Especially if you're not a Vocaloid fan. And I think I will put a notice up about it.
I gotta say, like you said, you have a lot of ideas. And if this first story is any indication you have great ideas and the whole concept is wonderful. I can see it going places if time and effort are put into developing a larger multi-chapter novel/historia. Other than that, just for the fresh concepts, ideas, and potential, you have earned a fav, a like, and a follow from me.
Goodnight.
Nice job. 9.5/10- rember nothing is truly perfect
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7231092
Wow thx to both of you.
OMG
I PUT THIS IN MY WATCH LATER WHEN I FIRST SAW IT LIKE, ' oh, cool.. I guess...' BUT KNOW I LOVE THIS SONG SO I'M GOING TO READ IT RIGHT NOW~!
7279224 I'mma probably rewrite this at some point so, be prepared.
7279231 kk
Now I kinda want to make vocaloid fanfiction for random vocaloid songs I like XD
7279267 I'm doing the entire Seven Sins Series!