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Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash end up going on a vacation to Whinny Land, and Fluttershy doesn't want to do any of the rides except for a very select few. Rainbow Dash becomes frustrated, but she just might get exactly what she wants and more.
Finally made a fic with Fluttershy as a main character. The only characters from the Mane Six that hasn't been a main character in my "comedy" fics are now just Rarity and Applejack. Hmm...
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Oh my gosh, I'm dying!
This is the funniest thing I've read in a while.
It wasn't until significantly through the fic that I realised that they were not fillies/children. I was reading it up until the mention of the maze as though the setting was sometime between getting their cutie marks and the start of season one.
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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It does mention that she got the tickets through a raffle at an "animal enthusiasts" group (best I could up with) and that she's been friends with Rainbow Dash since they were fillies.
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That could still place it in the timeframe I said.
I would expect Fluttershy to be a member of an animal enthusiast group at any point after getting her cutie mark.
If they were the equivalent of teenagers, then they would not see themselves as young fillies any more, just as a teenager doesn't consider themselves a child.
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It should be clear now. I mentioned "Twilight and the rest of her friends" in that area.
You seem to switch from Whinny Land to Whinny World partway through. Just a minir edit.
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Fixed! (thanks impromptu editor!)
Whinny land? I wonder if it was founded by Walnut Whinny?
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I'm just surprised she didn't shit bricks.