Starlight Glimmer had sought revenge against Twilight Sparkle for so long. What she didn't expect was for her hated foe to show her a better way...
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Hmmm.... Is this part of your main story.... series?
Because, in your main series, I think Twilight married Flash Sentry... right?
Did they get divorced or something?
Or is this not in your main story curve?
7057540 This is just my look at what happened in the season five finale, from Starlight's perspective.
7057540 This is more like Starlight's point of view from the season 5 finale.
7057577 Okay, thanks.
You definetely should put starlight in you mlp universe, it will be good seeing her with sunset shimmer
Looking at the story from Starlight's perspective makes her reformation more believable... to an eerie degree. At the very least, it's a good story that explains a bit. Good job
This story has some serious pacing issues. It all goes by far too quickly. You practically skipped over the important parts and focused mainly on stuff we already know about. Most of this stuff happened at least partially on screen. What's the point in writing about that?
Well, on the bright side, what you seem to lack in creativity, you make up for in spelling and grammar. There are no technical issues that I can see.
What I don't get is how you can write something like this despite clearly having quite a bit of experience. It would be almost decent --relatively speaking-- if it was your first story, but you already have quite a few. Maybe this was just a dud. It happens to every writer at some point.
Good one. Short and technically well done. Can serve as a leeway between season 5 opener and closer