This story is a sequel to Rumors
During a summer heatwave, the group decides to cool off with a visit to the beach. Sounds like fun, until Coppermane and Fluttershy see a little more skin on each other than they're used to. Fluttershy in nothing but a two-piece swimsuit, and Coppermane in nothing but swim trunks serves to make the couple very hormonal.
They try to act as nonchalant as possible, but the temptations are high, even though they've mutually agreed to wait. Can they keep their desires in check?
WARNING: Contains 2nd base steamy moments. This warning is mostly for my more loyal readers who aren't used to this kind of thing.
Coppermane & Fluttershy Series: 2.3
**Popular on March 23, 2016 - How the heck did that happen? Thanks everyone! 
Very nice and very sweet. I don't really know who Coppermane is, but Fluttershy is written perfectly, and Coppermane fits her so well. I want to see more of this couple, and more of this universe. I especially like how this still works if you take the pony out.
7051883 read the first two stories too, they are really nice and full of romantic fluff.
There are totally no hints of a future story right at the end.
7052062 Don't worry, there will be more
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Out of the two stories I read based on Copper,and and Fluttershy, this one was really romantic and really well written. Man your stories with these two love birds are simply the best. Kinda reminds me as myself with Fluttershy
. Besides that, awesome story dude, keep up the good work.
What does Amorosity mean?
7054837 Dictionary.com defines it as: inclined to love, especially sexual love; showing or expressing love; being in love; enamored.
I know what it means, but I just couldn't put it into words myself.
Really liked the story, and the fact that you used a lot of details and adjectives to describe the characters feeling and the setting. Most writers arent as detailed as you are
Good to see another story by you. Keep up the perfect and amazing work.
7138516 Glad you liked it! Thanks for the support
there's nothing wrong with steamy moments. Its only a matter of time until they do IT. That aside, Great story!
I apologize for not commenting earlier (I was on mobile, easy to read stories, HORRID to comment on them). I felt you did a wonderful job bringing out Shy's character and even her flirty side. Coppermane compliments her well. I could easily "see" the characters as I read the piece. I look forward to reading other adventures of these two.
You know what? Bravo for making this not disgusting. Yes, it's just 2nd Base, but that's pretty rare in Fan-fiction. I was actually conflicted on whether I should be hard or not. It's that good. It's certainly not perfect, I mean, I could've only imagined what would've happened if other people saw what they were doing, and I did get a bit anxious going into this, (because I don't usually read 2nd base clop-fics. That's just me though.) but the good outweighs the bad here, and I wasn't actually grossed out. Neat.
7359621 how would it've been gross, exactly? I'm just curious
7359630 An essays worth of excruciating amounts of extreme detail over every part of each body in the steamy moments would've been pretty gross. There's a reason clop-fics are stereotyped to be as repulsive as many believe. Luckily, and surprisingly, yours isn't one of them.
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btw, this was the first fic I read made by you, wow!! I don't regret it, I haven't read such lovely quality fics for so long
Thank you very much!
I tried my best to explore more of the characters' shy personalities while keeping them in character as much as possible. While also trying to make it somewhat sexy as they explore each other
7433497 Was that a reply? Sorry but I didn't get a notification
Nevermind, It was good
What does 2nd base mean?
7570649 I didn't realize that line was still in there. I think a part of me died a little from reading what I wrote
. It's removed now.
7570865 I need to rewrite all my earlier stories eventually. Especially Sweet & Delicate.
Oh the re reading. . . @.@
#,#
Steam, checked,
Two hormonal bodies, checked
Desire, checked!
Lets roll!
As good as when i first read it, even a bit better 'cause I wasnt been exposed to clop in many time
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We may not cop the sbow but hell we cop the heat, melbourne weather is the worst. Sometimes melbourne goes on vacation. Nice and sunny. 5 minutes later its pissin down rain, but damn the heats bad. Port arlington gets it bad. 5 hours in the sun i got 2nd degree burns accross my whole body
So... I missed this chapter which is why i was confused when sunset said she caught both fluttershy and coppermane getting steamy at the beach. Was like "huh i dont remember reading anything like that" now i see why. Ahh well.
Finished reading. All i can say is.... Wow, that was hot. Even though now i know what happens (spoiler, new readers do not hover over) they have sex it was safe to say they were going to experiment eventually. Well performed. And i enjoyed it.
Side post: Is it just me or you ever adjust your underwear and the elastic slips out of your hand and just flys back and hits the tip? Yeah... It hurts
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I fear for my life everyday so yahh.. We may be livable. But we definitely aren't safe. Then again nobody is. But here. Worst place to be very honest.