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Ixion #1 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · 3 · I ·

*sigh* The other story was reasonably entertaining. Admittedly, I rolled my eyes and skimmed or ignored the Gryphon kingdom junk that came up, really detracted from the more entertaining bits, but to end it with the whole Gryphons going to war thing... well, it is just sad. I can already tell what this is going to be like, the prologue made it so very clear. Good luck with your, erm, creative endeavors.

So a typical tyrant. I wonder why he thinks Equestria's allies will not help? Time to read on!

I agree with Sunset if I ever came across anyone names Skywalker I would never stop giving them good natured crap.

They are thinking a bit small right now. The ax may be a part of it but this nutter has world domination on his mind.

Interesting. I get the feeling that this will be like Excalibur. So the question is who is the true King or Queen then?


It doesn't necessarily call for the next King or Queen; merely, the one who TRUELY desires to wield the blade.

Well first of all I am so glad to see this story back! Now I wonder how Twilight's team is going to handle the uncovering of the conspiracy?

It does make me wonder if these two could make a cute couple. Still I get the feeling that they are going to be giving this insane griffin king a good thrashing.

I felt like a friendship between Sunset and Trixie isn't explored a lot, so I thought I'd do something cool with it!


Unfortunately, the semicolon issue is still alive and well :raritydespair:
Fortunately, the 3rd person perspective is a big step forward.

I was now DEFINATLY staying here


around three hundred years in the past

If it was 300 years ago, how did Luna orchestrate it? She was busy on the moon at that time :twilightoops:

her magically knowledge will add on nicely to the group


I spoke too soon about the new 3rd person look :raritycry:
Celestia also felt odd this chapter.

I think at this point, I'm just gonna hope the 2018 chapters are a big step forward. I don't know how many more semicolons and massive sentences I can take :raritycry:

What do you want, Sunset?"

You accidentally the quotation mark.


Huzzah! 2018 was the big step up I was looking for!

Oh, Anon-a-Miss makes a showing. Huh.

Yeah, these past two chapters have been a huge step forward. I'm much more actively looking forward to the rest of the story now.

And then Forgotten Friendship happened.

Yes, it is here as well, unfortunately. I don't know when I'm going to come back to this one--I've been hard at work on my current multi-chapter story, Dear Faithful Student--but as with Revenant, whenever I do come back to this, I'll probably rewrite some sections and then give it to an editor for a final polish before I continue. There are still pieces and plot elements of this story I am dissatisfied with looking back.

If these past two chapters were any indication, I'm really looking forward to when you do get around to working on this story again.

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