• Member Since 24th Jan, 2015
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Muramasa


I like Twilight Sparkle, Sunset Shimmer, and writing OK stories.

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Twilight Sparkle is the perfect example of an upstanding citizen. She values friendship over anything else. She gives back to her community. She sees the good in every pony, and she would never do anything if it meant hurting others.

Well, she tries. And when she messes up, she goes to those that know the most.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 7 )

That was a pretty good story.

Whoah-Sunset's mother is Starlight Glimmer.
:pinkiegasp:
Didn't see that coming.

6599590

Starlight Shimmer is still the best mom a mare could ask for.

Not exactly :twilightsmile:

6599711
Heheheh... I knew that... :twilightsheepish:

6599590

I figured that Starlight was a common name in Equestria.

Also NOTHING ELSE worked with "Shimmer" that had aliteration. Oh well. Hope you liked the story!

6600631
How could I have miss it? They both have the same last name!

This was a nice, pleasant read. However, I can't help but feel it could have been much more effective if it wasn't trying to do so much. Specifically, Sunset is permanently back in Equestria? That, uh, is quite the detail, but it ultimately didn't contribute anything to the story. So why was it there? Stuff like that. Throwaway bits of information can be effective, but when the story is this short and focused, they just end up a distraction.

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