Ok ?

You're an evil evil woman.

Ha, nice!
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Finally a mare in your life.
And she IS funny!

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I think the adventure parts and the worldbuilding in the Twilight is Magic series were pretty awesome.

But yeah, his clop is definitely good.

I really like how you showed them as friends but revealed that they were in a relationship, and you did it pretty smoothly, too.

“Fine, you want to play this game? Let’s play! You’re brash, arrogant, reckless, impulsive, you never think, you always just act, you never stop to consider what you’re doing, it’s always just CHARGE with you!”
“Yep, all true,” Rainbow said with a grin.
“That’s not something to be proud of!” Twilight replied back.
“I think it is.”

Me too XD

It was cute! You could've kept this SFW by skipping the clop and it woldn't take much from the story...
But I'm defenitely not complaining!
Have a like

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I appreciate the Like! I actually had written it without the clop, but my cowriter just really wanted it in here.

But you're right. It's a great story without it and I'm very proud of it because the idea came out of feelings I had myself about inadequacy.

Again, thank you so much for the comment and the like. :)