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Nefarious Porpoise


Dolphin Mad Scientist. Also, respect trans people.

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Alright, wish me luck! I´m diving in!

Foot Fetish for the win! :heart:

Good Lord, was this good. I´m seriously impressed!

The scene was erotic as hell, and the writing is quite unique and professional. Hell, the interactions between the characters are one of the best aspects of the whole story; they are so well portrayed you don´t doubt for a second that this is how they would react in this situation.
Great job, I mean it, great job! I hope you keep this kind of stories coming up!

Foot fetish and bondage you say? Now I'm curious


>is interested
>reads "Heavy foot fetish, consensual bondage, and sexy sleepover antics."
>oh
>spaghetti falls out of pocket
>???
>fails to profit

Not really one for foot fetishes, but I :heart: this ship now.

That was amazing.

I liked how this story gave us a look into each of the Sirens' heads, and I liked how their dynamic was portrayed.
The Sirens are - above all else - a team, and they work as a team.

I mean, you know, when they're not fighting each other over that piece of Apple-booty.
Given how I enjoyed this story, I'd actually like to see more of that particular plot (pun intended), clop or not.

Thanks for the story, author. It's a fine first submission.

Wow. I didn't fully expect this.

All hail the AppleLings! Cuteness was very nice amongst the sexiness, would love to read more

I never have said this before.

THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL

There needs to be more to this!

Yeah going to agree, it's...surprisingly good. That particular fetishes doesn't get used much even though it's one of the most common. A sequel would be great.
Perhaps with the Humane Six accepting AJ's fetish. Their reconciliation is worth a story in of itself.
Incidentally, it's also a great AJ story that got her down in the best way. The EQG verse has made Applejack consistently relevant and entertaining for some reason.

RD is a cold bitch.

Ignoring the fetish material, which I am totally into, this is a really sweet 'romance' story, the scene with the toy at the end selling me completely. I need more. Now.

This was a really impressive story. Especially for a first submission. Great work! :twilightsmile:

*Puts on BL Mordecai voice*

"Like. Hell."

As a few others have pointed out, the characters interactions here are really the spotlight of the story. Once I started, it was hard to stop reading, I had to know how this night would play out.. And it didn't disappoint one bit.

I feel like Adagio's thoughts on her feet reflect some of women's opinion on their own. I rarely ever meet another who feels their feet are high on the list of their own favorite features.

Another thing is Aria's occupation. Never really saw her in this sort of field, but it is played out convincingly well.

Over all, damn good story worth reading over for times to come.

Hope you enjoyed! Not sure if I'll write again, but this was fun.

W-what? you're joking, right? I'd do fucking flips on my ceiling if I could read more stories from you.

I find it odd someone as stubborn as Rainbow dash would be dragging adagio around with her to soccer games. She's usually the kind of girl to hold grudges.

Really enjoyed this! Glad I found it after a couple of years away from this site. Any thoughts on a sequel or another story in general? I like you're writing style

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Thanks! I'm always happy (and surprised!) people can still find and enjoy this years down the road.

Much as I personally adore this story, I never had any plans for a sequel. I have... the prologue of a Rarijack clopfic sitting on my hard drive, and that's it for clop. >_> Aside from that you'd have to pursue my non-clop account (can PM me if you want).

so who got the apple in the end is what i'm wondering

Dick move AJ, dick move.

Hah. An Apple of Discord right at the end. I love it.

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