• Member Since 6th May, 2012
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PolishValsion


Comments ( 38 )

Damn. The dislikes escalated quickly...

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I kinda expected them. I just wanted to pour this story here, since there are people who like this kind of stuff.

Anyway, back to Ace Combat now. For good. ^ ^"

5716844 Glad you're taking this well.

5716859 Yeah.
I'm just wondering what is the exact reason for so many downvotes? I doubt it has something to do with bad grammar or pacing. Maybe the guys were expecting explicit sex, but found something else or were simply unsatisfied.
Oh well.

Yeah this is really weird. Like a massive amount of downvotes but no one said anything. Someone targeted you I think because that is really fishy :(

Great story either way though <3 I loved it!

Gotta be honest here.

I liked it. A lot.

There are a few grammatical things here and there, but this was cutely interesting.

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Forgive me for any problems with grammar, English is only my second language. ^ ^"

5722185 :) I figured that based on the things I saw. It's not a big deal for me frankly. I enjoyed the read, nonetheless. :)

HAHAHA they look hilarious in that cover image XD ....

its weird (your story) no offense Im sure someone liked it but well written so the downvotes are out of place

5724544
This story is a product of the dark corners of my mind. It's supposed to be weird.
Never mind the downvotes, I hope the upvotes will one day surpass them.

Nice~

I liked it :3

As a fan of foot fetish stories, i like this story, but the way it's written is getting some downvotes.

Do not get discouraged, i'd love to read more from you.

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Please elaborate on that "way it's written". Is it too long, not explicit enough?

Even still, this is a one-shot attempt and I doubt I'll try something like that in a long time. I have the main story to focus on.

Oh god, please continue this.

5728767 I would say that i comes from the repetitive aspect of some terms and the lack of synonymous.
Sorry, i'm french so i wouldn't be able to describe what is bugging me, but yes, repetitive would be the term closest to what i'm looking for.

5728848
Sorry about repetition, then, but I kinda wrote this story from personal experience and I tend to avoid... extreme stuff, if you know what I mean. :twilightblush:

5729165
Hold it ! ... From... "personnal experiences" ?

You mean this happend to you ? ... You lucky pony. :pinkiehappy:

5729393
Um... yeah I managed to convince my best friend (a girl) to try it. We had fun and we still do from time to time, :twilightblush:

Where are you from?

5733615 I believe my will nickname will cue you in on the country's name ;)

5733756 Doland from Poland?

5734332 Poland, yes. But the name is Andrew ^ ^"

5736066 So we live in the same country

I'm more of a fan of full weight trample, but amazing story either way!
Would love to see more.

I thought I was the only person to have a foot fetish. :rainbowlaugh: jk

Why did I read this?! WHY?!?! I like it.

Wow. I would have been nope about a quarter of the way through 0% of that had it not been ButtonBelle. Must... Retain... OTP....

5723982 As a person who treats anatomy seriously, the cover image really rustled my jimmies. No offense, Valsion.

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I would have liked this story if it weren't for the violence. D/s is one thing, kicking someone in the gut is another entirely.

5817414 Aw, come on, that kick wasn't THAT hard... it wasn't really meant to cause much pain.
^ ^"

Derpibooru sent me here.

You forgot to add the sex tag.

7172145 There is very little sex, if any.

7174432 False sex. If there WAS actual sex.......................

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