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Regal-Storm


Enjoy making stories.

Comments ( 8 )

Cool story. Can't wait for more

This looks like it could be pretty good. I can't wait to see the aftermath of that last comment.

This has potential, but not for me.
I'll leave a like, but I won't be following it.

"Greetings, mortal. Your time in this realm has passed, but you may return to the living, should you agree to a certain price."
"Sure, anything, name it!"
"You must watch over a pony princess in another world."
"...What? That's stupid. No."

~Fin~

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Jul 1st, 2017

Not too bad so far, but too soon in the story to give any sort of really detailed comment. Definately want to read more though!

Interesting idea No offence but i hope your writing gets better as the story progresses (It will!)

Who went down vote crazy?

I like it so far.

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