• Member Since 24th Jan, 2016
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Jack_haven


I'm just your average writer/gamer/roleplayer. I'm a dude in case you are wondering. And I hope to become one of the greatest writers around. Thanks for reading. -Haven.

Comments ( 15 )

This definitely looks good, I can't wait to see more.

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Thanks for the compliments. And I will attempt to write at the fastest speed I can. But sadly I'm not a very quick writer. Anyway, hopefully you will enjoy the rest of the story as I write it.


Also, to those who are down-voting, please, do not hesitate to post WHY you are doing so. Letting me know what may be wrong with my writing could help it be more likable. Feedback is the key to proper writing after all.
Well, I hope you all enjoy this as I continue to write. And thanks for taking the time to read my story. -Haven :moustache:

This is awesome mate.

Interesting premise, is this based on Codename S.T.E.A.M. by chance given the outfit and type of gun?

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No it is not, though I do know what game you are talking about.
Thanks for the compliment in the meanwhile. -Haven :moustache:

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Mar 23rd, 2016

@Deletedcommenter So, you are simply flaming, Goodbye to your comment, and goodbye to being able to comment on any of my stories, as all you are doing is negative commenting. If you had some actual feedback then I might be more okay with this. Since you do not, then I am not okay with this.

WHY HAS NO ONE COMMENTED!??!?! FINE I'LL SAY IT this a great story please continue

Just found this, great so far.

The only thing though is that when I hit the link for the picture of the gun I get a sword instead.

7238670 ....Strange....the link must've broken....I'll remove it for now until I can find the image again. Thanks for pointing that out. Though please don't expect any more on this story for now.

Thanks for the feedback. -Haven :moustache:

I was expecting a biopic on Gabe Newell.

Fitst thing i thought when i saw the cover art is "... Duncan?"
Who else thought the same?

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