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Critic Aria Blaze


Critic, story writer, blog maker, and assistant video editor from for JawsOFailure Channel Youtube

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The Battle of the Bands is over and the Dazzling's are now enrolled in Canterlot High. Sunset Shimmer, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack and Fluttershy are doing there best to help them with the flow of things, from making friends to being apart of activity's.
But Aria still doesn't get the point. Until Sunset signs her Adagio and Sonata to help her tour new students. But to there surprise its not just one student but 5 new boy students. Only problem is there form of friendship is a lot different in behavior then the entire schools point of view.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 18 )

I like her with glases btw this story is good

Interesting; liking the characters involved; romance being a tag; good first impression with chapter 1
- Whelp I'm gonna keep an eye on this, you have caught my attention, now all that remains it to see where this leads

Thank you to everyone for the support! This little project was originally a bet Idea to have one of the OC characters its based off of read it aloud on YouTube with some video stuff (which is going to happen now I won the bet!) But it now has become a lot more than that so I hope to get Chapter 2 up soon :) Thank you once againscontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpf1/v/t1.0-9/1934558_536129963233554_2730955699062278418_n.jpg?oh=c0b6854c73e8572bda429c386b962f35&oe=577A25B0

Based on the story description, I strongly recommend you get an editor.

7127619 Thank you for the feed back I'm in the mist of working on getting one again my original editor to be hasn't been able to help me out so its been difficult so I'm in the process of getting one hopefully before I post Chapter 2

if that really happened, tell them to post it, we internet love the suffering of others.
also, no need to use copyright free games.....( we wont tell) ;).

P.S.: Skullaria

7185650 Haha sending that to Skully now, Skullaria XD

Nice start I admit. Can't wait to read more.

Every time I seem to give you more stories about us I seem to be loosing my mind....what am I doing here again.....

Cue the wedding bells, and remember if its on the backdoor, you will still go to heaven.

Lol Skullys reference to EVE in Nomash system I took it over that part of the game area for a bit Skully always said I would make a excellent dictator lol

7226049 no Goldie Skully calls it Nomash Potato System :raritywink:

7226355 This is true Nomash Potato System, right next to Sahk Ti system.....

Is there a female equivalent to cocblocked? geez.

SunBlunt-confirmed
Gnata-confirmed

FALCON PUNCH!!!!!!!

7312854 I'm figuring you like it also having Goldie watch clips were Adagio speaks he still doesn't know what she sounds like.

7313220 record it and put it on the channel.

Aaaaan we are back, daaaaw embarrased Adagio, i didnt even know she could go that side of the emotional Spectrum.

Goldie, i dont know how much involvement in making the story you have, but damn that last line, you had to have some influence on it, growing an soft spot for Nimbus head?

Finally, i will aid in the world conquering if i can be in charge of Japan.

7462715 Well as the rules we have now set for Goldie he is not allowed to read the story until the rest of the guys have so we will see what his reaction is. Also thanks for reminding me on Goldie's first quote on Adagio that was too funny.

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