• Member Since 19th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 20th, 2016

Smoku


I've been trying to get off this ride for a quarter of my life.

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The only constant in this world is change. All things must bend to change, even Chaos.

Cover art is The Garden of Death by Hugo Simberg.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 6 )

Well, that was... that indeed was... something i'm sure. Just not quite sure what indeed it was.

I'm with Pyro. That was certainly a novel experience, to say the least. I feel like some threads in this tapestry could use a little tightening, but there's definitely some good stuff here.

I got a very "Bloodborne" feel off the Catacomb's description.

This is amazing. So zecora is the new chaos god?

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Yeah, to be honest, I'm not super proud of this. I did originally have some more exposition and explanations planned, but it seemed to be somewhat unnecessary and straining on the story. In the end, I decided to go with less detail. It was probably too much cutting, and could have done with more meat, though.

To be honest, Fromsoft's modern RPGs (Demon's/Dark Souls, Bloodborne) were some of the biggest inspirations for this story.


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Thank you! Yep, she is.

For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil,
Must give us pause


Interesting!

7058275 Well, that makes a lot of sense, I've always been a big fan of Dark Soul's not quite forthcoming story, Japanese story telling is always quite, different compared to western story telling.

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